Armageddon 2004

Armageddon 2004

Armageddon 2004

by PONBIKI

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Mase
Artist
81 comments
# 49  
Good Lord.  Defenders, I'm amazed!  Getting artists to work together on the internet is like herding cats, and this is easily the best collab I've ever had the good fortune to witness.  I've seen all time bests from many of you (go Johnny!), and the story kicked ass - especially the ending, where you all come together to outsmart the unbeatable in true underdog fashion.
Pon - great job!  31 pages is a feat in iteself.  However, the ease in which Koji killed everyone made it a bit less entertaining, as there was never much tension.
Overall, I think that the Defenders came through. Kick ass job, guys.

gryphon
Artist
69 comments
# 48  
ok im back, all of them were great.

pon, that was a ton of hardy ass-kickin goodness, a little goofy at times with the ease at which the defenders were dispatched, but still boss.

Ayako, nice intro, the white space left me wanting more, but still good.

Mr. Kick, very good man, we have to battle some time later.

Fenix, damn dude, your work is so PRO its insane, although it was unfinished the art was still amazing.

P2, man, solid work as always. colors were great.

Ashito, nice, the 2 ton kick thing was kinda funny, but awesome.

Son, you're work is insanely good, a little confusing at times, and the whole Shredd/ Son thing was weird, and seemed really a stretch, still, solid work on the art.

Shredd, silver, you bastard, your art is crazy detailed, just by looking at it you feel the mood. nicely done.

Overall, i thought this was very good, brought alot of different styles together and showcased alot of good work. i hope to join the next Armagaeddon Defenders, just tell me when the sign up is and i'll throw down. great stuff. MEGA ZEN.

Fuudasha
Artist
92 comments
# 47  
I'll keep this mutha short, you all rocked it!  I've read it all like twice now, and I really enjoyed it.  Continuity wise, it was a tad broken up, but it still had me entertained for each individual part.  Really a heart rocker here for the defenders.  Pon, you had a lot of work to do, but man, I know it must have been pretty fun to just nail each page one after the other.  What momentum and raw talent.  *sniff*  Greatness.

gryphon
Artist
69 comments
# 46  
.................hold on.....im trying to gather myself up from viewing all this awesomeness.........may be awhile. brb.

DEDieckmann (SkullcapComix)
Artist
462 comments
# 45  
Thanks for looking out for me too, chunkplex........ its been a ... well... rough... last week and a half.... lets just say I want to take pons comic, and in it, replace all the defenders with my *former* band members........ yup.

DEDieckmann (SkullcapComix)
Artist
462 comments
# 44  
yeah dude. sorry man. i didnt see that the comment ended. it didnt post endjois name, but a little ">" instead or something. Neither of us know why. So really i was mad at endjoi. The reason i blew up so much was becuase i THOUGHT it was you and I was like "why the hell is he saying this? i dont een know the guy!" But yeah. Sorry dude, I apologize again.

Tronix
Artist
138 comments
# 43  
sorry skull i didn't  view the apologize.. just  forget it and relax..it was all a mistake

chunkplex
Artist
184 comments
# 42  
Just Relax Yuyitron...He was mistaken. He DID appologize, now lets forgive and forget.

Tronix
Artist
138 comments
# 41  
dam it  skullcap.. your pissing me off.. thats comments wasn't mine . mines end in "can i join"you know that!! but i dont like the way you blame me.. Who cares about the wrestler in my first fight! this is void.. you create what you want.. and for real men you look like a real LOOSER in this fight . not a single crap page!

DEDieckmann (SkullcapComix)
Artist
462 comments
# 40  
Its cool, Endjoi. Hit me up on AIM sometime, "skullcapcomix", and I'll fill you in on the script and on current progress and whatnot. It will be done.

endjoi
Artist
77 comments
# 39  
Dan, sorry I got so pissy.  I got mad 'cause everyone worked really really hard and it didn't seem like you cared much and I kinda lost my temper.  But shit happens, it's understandable ^_~  I hope yoiu eventually finish your part though, 'cause I'm intirested to see what happens.  

kitetsu
21 comments
# 38  
Hey Pon, let's get Koji to duke it out with my Raf sometime! Steel God VS Dark Angel! ;P

fel/P2
Artist
275 comments
# 37  
hehe oops for all who wanted to know i was suppose to add a thoom sound to indicate the impact of the hit,and the building shot was for to set it up to go into zombi's part where p2 took down part of the city

DEDieckmann (SkullcapComix)
Artist
462 comments
# 36  
alright, well, I owe yuyitron an apology then, and I still wish I knew why so much hate.... like...... like I said, you really dont know what the last month as held for me, and Like I said..... If i at all could have turned in anything at all, I would have. What you saw is still all I have done, and thats IT. Thats how those pages still are. Theres nothing else than that. I know its frustrating and rightfully it should piss you off.... but I would have had those same comments were i involved in it or not at all. Marley gets this same kinda stuff thrown at her in the forum all the time.... I mean.... sorr if I cant ALWAYS say that things are awesome..... but I really cant just ALWAYS ONLY say good things first.... sometimes bad comes first, just deoends on what I see first. or what I organize in my head first. I apologize to you if it seemed like I was hating, and I think i cleared up the rest above enough.

DEDieckmann (SkullcapComix)
Artist
462 comments
# 35  
And now, just like I said I would do...
Pon, I already did yours. Again, the ending, shit. amazing. Dont think i was saying you werent a BEAST of an artist, there were just a few areas I felt could have been handled better. But yeah, 31 pages is an awesome accomplishement. Did you think it would go that far? Your interpertations of everyone were badass.

Akayo- Your cover page was really cool. I dont know why, but I kept going back to look at it again and again. Like, there was way more of the human side of Akayo in that pic that I dont usually think of when I think of zombi girl with exploding eyeball and gaint monster hamster thing. The shading was nice, were those water colors? The black and white, and even certain aspects of the style helped it run smoothly into Mr. Kick's.

Mr. Kick- As always, loved the tones. Like..... it almost looks like you never use the same one twice. Thats cool. I also liked how a lot of the fight scene looked like it was being "filmed", whether done on purpose or not. Almost like it was through a fish eye lense or other specialty lense of some sort. I think i liked your rendition of Koji the most. at times almost looked like a spot on for Pons version, but the facr reminded me a LOT of the style of Tim Sale, an artist who has worked for Marvel and DC, and is often paired with writer Jeph Loeb. I love his style, so, thats a good thing.

Fenix- A great start. I remember hearing way back what your part was going to be, and was like oh SHIT!!! And then I heard that you wouldnt be submitting anything either and I was like.... And then I saw you still got some in, and was like SWEET! The first page is amazing. I like the fire colors you stuck in as bg colors. I could tell from page 3 that the face off between Fenix and Koji would be massive, and would have lead ultimately to the heroic destruction of the battleship. I know you had shit going on too like I did that took all the armageddon time away. But you at least got some in, which just shows me I gotta kick my own self in the ass even more next time I'm involved in anything. Shouldnt be too hard though after recent events.... *sigh*


Fel/P2- I opened it to see a dying Fenix and was like HOLY HELL! That was pretty cool, and the whole "buried with his bros" thing was a nice touch. I always liked when you colored your stuff as opposed to not... coloring.. it... um.... Yeah. the glow associated with P2 using his powers is always a nice touch. I liked the utter destruction on page 7 from the flying bus, wish there had been maybe one more page too see what happened.

Ashito- holy shit man. From the Akira-esque into explosion, to the P2- Mr. Kick tag team, with the elastic man kick from hell delivered to Koji... damn, that was cool looking. I never even woulda thought of something like P2 using his powers on another defender to make his impact stronger. And then.... DEMONS!!!! complete with little demon chubbies (on the large one on the right side of the page)! CLASSIC!


S.O.N.- What can I say, man? very cool over all. A little hard to understand i places, but still, the art made up for it. Especially tha pages that were in color. Those were beautiful. I would have liked to seen more of what happened with the whole SON merged with Shredd thing.... like, maybe a bit more fight there (upon reading again, I saw there was an actual confrontation, but looks like  it lasted a second and was over. It was still an awesome idea, something again that never would have crossed my mind as even a possibility.

Silver- As always the gritiness is awesome. Still cant believe you do all this with ONLY pencil, man....Freaks me out to tell you the truth, haha. The using just one color with highlights and shadows is cool as always, adds the the attitude and feel of the battle overall. The SHredd transformation scene was badass, I still dont understand how you came up with the design for him so quick.... and how you can duplicate it so flawlessly each time you draw him. (or build him). The anti-matter core thing.... a sweet ending man.

See..... sorry if I came off as so HATEFUL or whatever was said about me, but when I have as little time to post these things as I have lately, I have to post what is in my head freshest, and when i think of it, or I'll forget, and who knows what will be important or not. Maybe that serves me right. Maybe I do all my posts in microsoft word first till they are done, and THEN post them. Or maybe not. maybe I'll post whatever whenever I want, if its what I feel like posting, just like everyone else on this site feel like they have the right o do. I never HATED on anyone. and if my stating what I got out of reading it is hateful and WRONG... well, again, I say whats the point of a crits system anyways?

DEDieckmann (SkullcapComix)
Artist
462 comments
# 34  
And dude, I never said "how cool" mine was. Mines not ANYTHING REALLY, as it isnt even done. I only compared scripts, with mine, and with that of the defenders. So I didnt particularly like that Koji just blinked and all the defenders were dead. Im not the only one. You know, just because I dont say nothing but sugar coated good crap doesnt mean I should be silenced by the likes of you. I read ALL of it. I sat and I read Pons, then all of the defenders. I read it all, Before I even thought of anything. And when I got done, thats the first stuff that came to mind. And in the interest of making Armageddon better as a whole, YES, I AM going to say the shit that could have been better, the shit that DIDNT work, becuase up until then, ALL im hearing is PON you are a BEAST! PON, 31 PAGES OMG YOU RULE, DEFENDERS OMG YOU RULE! OMG OMG OMG, THIS WAS THE BEST THING EVER!
And while it WAS damn cool, and while it did come out better than a lot of people initially thought it would, NO, it wasnt perfect, and YES, a LOT could have been better. Sorry I feel like telling what I see, and not just GAWKING at the number of pages.

And again, dude, until your best weapon becomes NOT a fat old bald washed up professional wrestler, DONT talk to me about opinions, creativity, getting shit done (you dont understand the HALF of what Ive gone through in the last month, so dont even PRETEND to) or ANYTHING else.

endjoi
Artist
77 comments
# 33  
Yuyitron's comment ends with "can I join the next on" my comment starts right after that, where the little arrows are.  Sorry about that, I dunno what happened....

endjoi
Artist
77 comments
# 32  
Dan, that comment was from me, Endjoi....Something wierd I think happened with the commenting so my name didn't show up....or something, I dunno.

DEDieckmann (SkullcapComix)
Artist
462 comments
# 31  
To Yuyitron:

I may have given up my place in this contest, But that doesnt mean I gave up my place to have thoughts on what did happen and the freedom to speak what I though, thus a comments section. Yuyitron, apparently you SAW the pages I put in the forum, so, i dont know what you are bitching about anyways. There was no STORY in those pages, thus, woulda been probably even MORE complaints form you if I HAD posted them.

Thidr, I dont recall ever WORKING WITH you in the first place, so that suits me just fucking fine that I would never get the "chance" to work with you again. Dont recall ever WANTING to work with you OR Stone Cold in the first place. Next time you tell me I cant speak my mind (Im pretty sure this isnt the first time), I'll POLITELY tell you to fuck off. Or maybe thats what Im doing now. And dont say "WE" again. I had way WAY more to do with this than you could ever even WISH to have had.

A Bad Idea
Artist
320 comments
# 30  
HAHA, some time to comment on all of this (at, like, 12 AT NIGHT HWOO-WOOOOOCAFFEINE)

Pon : You already get the "BEAST AWARD" for pimpin' the 31...hell, you get another one just for drawing decompressed SHREDD. KILLER colors, angles, even the redesigns...everything artwise you get sodas for. BUT, putting that aside, let's crack down on what really matters. What I found most detracting about this was the narrative, no not because Pon's English isn't good, because I felt the whole premise of it felt like reading a children's book; having to explain what was going on in each and every panel (even the more confusing ones) felt like I was being walked through the story instead of being SUCKED INTO IT, you know what I mean ? It felt more like a play-by-play by Estrella instead of a narrative of a comic story, so I didn't really feel any depth reading a summary of actions instead of an EPIC narrative. Story delivery is VERY important in portraying an image, and frankly the step-by-step process didn't do it for me.

Also, like Dan, I have a complaint regarding Koji cutting through the Defenders like nothing. I KNOW that comparitively, Koji CAN wipe them out in one sweep. BUT, I always felt that the premise behind characters and their battles was that power was NO limit to the fights they could bring; I mean, the fighter with the most wins on this site is a black-lunged Brit with a chainsaw, a dirty mouth and a 7-incher pincher : NOTHING compared to a god, but he kicks his ass anyway. Of course, seeing how Pon is drawing for said god character, his interpretation of the battle is practically limitless. But c'mon, I felt it was a LITTLE ridiculous to have Dan killed by P2's own power and that the only thing Fenix managed was laser-eye-beams. In short, I agree with whoever mentioned that the 31 pages could have been better used.

Overall, excellent fight, but could've been better.

Ayako : Your side works excellent as a prologue to the whole ordeal, and I agree that this is one of your best looking sequentials yet. However, the abundant white space made the comic look pretty much unfinished. Then there's the frame with the upside-down Ayako that always confused me, perhaps a better angle and position couldn't been applied ? *shrug* Anyhow, good show. Nice way to get the ball rolling.

Mr. Kick : Now THIS is the shit you should be bringing into your regular fights. Doubtlessly your best work yet. You pick off nicely where Ayako leaves off and leave a nice ending for both of the lower-tier Defenders (no offense ^^;). The action frames seem to have too much open space at times, so perhaps some fancy angles or perspective could be in order. Other than that, it's a fine fight. I'd love to see more work of this quality in the future, Johnny. :D

(One thing I noticed, you drew Koji TOTALLY BADASS like the first two times...and he kept getting gradually more retarded as the comic goes along. Not a crit or anything, but just something I felt like noting XD)

Fenix : It's a damn shame you couldn't finish this, it looked SO fucking boss EVEN with just these sloppy sketches. I needn't say anything about the art, I already KNOW you have that in the bag. You present an EXCELLENT conflict for Fenix and a superb ending (even if it wasn't drawn) for an event as big as this. I hope to see more completed works from you in the future. ^^

P2 : Quality work, good buddy. The story picks up nicely, though I would have liked to have seen the other Defenders in your comic. The pacing and angles are excellent, and the colors are outstanding. One thing though...WHAT is happening on that last page ??? P got bitch-slapped, and then......buildings ???? I'm soooo confused...>_O

Ashito : BANZAI MA~~~AN O_O. Shit dude, you really know how to rock those cityscape shots. Fucking killer, dude. One of the best entries IMO. Outstanding well-paced action, excellent representation of all characters, and the fucking DEMONSSSS O_O. My only complaint is that it ended too abrubtly, it seems. But the lack of discontinuity clears a path for the other Defenders to step in as well, so I guess that's a good thing.

Another question; Wouldn't a two-ton kick against Koji's armored body SHATTER Mr. Kick's leg ??? >_O

S.O.N : Your art pulls you through the fire as always. But I, too, felt that the SON/SHREDD FUUUSIOOOON felt a little out of place, especially considering the fact that SHREDD cooperates with NO ONE. It was pretty damn cool, though...but it made it seem like a DBZ fight afterwards when the SON/SHREDD hybrid flew up to chase Koji...all the flying in air and shooting beams, ya'know, that kinda thing...

SHREDD : Silver you already know how many infants I would ritually sacrifice if I could draw like this. The shades, the penwork, the TEXTURES MAN, THE TEXTURESSSSS O_O;;. You really put up a well-deserved SUCKER PUNCH to end the madness, masterful work as always ^_~


Good luck Pon and Defenders ! May the best battle win !

DarknessRising
29 comments
# 29  
Well, I must say about Pon's entry, a lot of the pages were like 3 or 4 panels... And not much detail in them... But then like Dan said, then you've got the stuff like Shredd there, in uber detail-mode. I think you might have even added more detail to that one than Silver did... Crazy. So in the end... It's a mixed bag. Some incredible stuff, some not so incredible stuff, but like Dan said, this was only round 1, the test round. Round 2 will be better.
Now, the defenders... Although some of the parts didn't exactly flow together too well, as individuals they were quite good, especially Zombi's and Silver's parts. Jar's was also pretty damn good, even if it wasn't finished, as was Johnny's (well, that one was finished). Damn, Johnny, you went all out on this one. Fel, also excellent. You're pen skills are incredible (assuming that's what you used, that is...). Sauceboy, also nice, albeit a tad bit different. The Shredd/SON combination was new, that's for sure. And Endjoi... Great job starting the story. Might not have been much action, but the beginning isn't necessarily always the most action filled. And Dan... From the first couple pages I've seen of it, it looks nice, though I want to see the whole thing... It's a shame you weren't able to get it all done on time, but hey, everyone has run-ins with real life sometimes... In the end, though, it would have been nice if the parts had flowed together more evenly, but hey, what can you do? It get's hard to coordinate things like this sometimes, but hey, it all came through and worked. Very nice to everyone, challenger and defenders alike.

endjoi
Artist
77 comments
# 28  
First off, Ponbiki, you did a fucking awesome job.  31 pages is no small feat, and although your grammer was off(and you called Ayako, Ayuka...no worries tho ^_^)I think your artwork more than made up for it.  I'm also very happy to see the exploding eye thing...I've been waiting for someone to use it.  you once again proved why you're one of the top artist on void...*heart*

Defenders, it was a pleasure working with you guys.  I've said this a million and a half times, but I am a huge fan of collaborations, and this was very VERY fun for me.  I know everyone put in their all, and did a kick ass job.  I am very pleased with how it turned out, even if there are some continuityu problems.  I think all things considered, we did an awesome job of putting this together.  

And Dan, you have a special place in my heart.  you've been very negative from the beginning, and I don't really think you have a right to be nitpicky about anyone's part in this, seeing as you didn't turn in a single fucking page.  we would have been happy with sketches, or the page that you posted in the forums.  I swear, with all the time you spent in the forums AFTER you said you were gonna leave, you probably could have thrown something together.  I could handle that, I could be okay with you leaving and giving us a default.  What I CAN'T stand is you criticizing everyone's stuff and then comparing it to your non-existant entry, and say our stuff is cool then go on for a paragraph about how much we sucked.  To be perfectly honest I don't think I'd ever work with you again because you're so negative and so obviously looking out for yourself, it's not even worth it.  anyway, I think I've said enough...

Tronix
Artist
138 comments
# 27  
well in my opinion ponbiki did a great job, 31 pages i'm not even finished reading it. But. great moves by his character and a lot ..lot of effort for the fight "armageddon... every one did a great job... what can i say.. can i join for the next one??

James
Artist
90 comments
# 26  
I love you too dan (no this isn't marley I SWEAR)

DEDieckmann (SkullcapComix)
Artist
462 comments
# 25  
dude marley.... i did NOT bitch about it because dan was the first to die. Ive known all along that EVERYONE was going to die. EVERYONE. WAsnt really a concern. EVEN if it was, Im USED to Pon killing Dan by now. LOL, its happened 3 times! AHAHAHA

NAh, I see your point, I guess I did kinda forget positive stuff. I guess you know, it just seemed like... whats the point right? In a way, it reminded me of the old Story Mode stuff Wu had going. Mar, you remember this stuff. Pon, No, I didnt want dan to be able to beat him by himself. SHIT, Dan doesnt even beat him in mine, Ashito and Fenix do, seeing as Fenix is like a million times stronger, and Ashitos got that damned book of hell stuffs.
Like, dont get me wrong guys. I, Like marley, can come off as harsh sometimes, But that dont mean I hate something. Pon, as always, your style and attention to detail blew me away. Like a said, SOME of the angles were a bit frustrating, especially with lack of explainations, but then I get to shit like Shredd and him facing off and its like... DAYUM. mother fucker drew parts of shredd I dont think even SHREDD knew he had on him. I'll get to the rest of everyone later. Sorry to come off so harsh, a lot was going on when I was typing this, and I guess I just got sick of typing. Gotta get to work now, be back later. And marley, before you go and say I posted something for one reason only, read what I wrote, and learn that that reason is not written Anywhere, nor did it ever even pass my mind. you know i still love you though (dont tell james). <3

Marley
Artist
259 comments
# 24  
Dan you need to check yourself before busting the shit out of everyone's work... I mean you didn't say ONE positive thing about Pon's 31 page entry. You just bitched about it because Dan was the first to die. You say his work wasn't creative? Dude he redesigned everyone... he used powers that have never been used by other characters (endjoi's exploding eye.. gave jar lazer vision) You bitch about him doing too many pages when you didn't turn in ONE page after TWO months... even fenix turned in some of his work, despite the fact that it wasn't finished.

Just shaddap dude

Marley
Artist
259 comments
# 23  
AHHAHAHAH!!! DAMN

PONBIKI
Artist
184 comments
# 22  
shit dan im sorry if i showed people getting wasted by koji.
in reallity you would not stand a chance to a god..no matter what powers you had given dan. every one knew this in there battles. they made it look that way. but i bet you wanted to be like dan can kill him all by himself.
sorry man  i know my reading was bad
in my comic. but atleast i met my dealine... i rarely work with a script. you all had a script. i had to basically come up with the script after i drew out the fight. so it was a little harder on my side.
and for you. now i belive, me killing your dude in the beggining was all worth it.. i hope the next arma will be better and more organized.. hopefully you be alittle smarter in joining something you still have nopt finished. i hope defenders win.. i don't care much any more... specially hearing from you dan your cool and all but sometimes you just gotta learn how to shut the fuck up.

sauceboy
Artist
99 comments
# 21  
......?

DEDieckmann (SkullcapComix)
Artist
462 comments
# 20  
I dont know what to say. I guess I expected more maybe? This is the first one though, after all, and I contributed to the not all it could be-ness... so.... yeah, I'll shut up.

As for crits though.... Pon... sorry, bud, but yours would have been 100% better had there been NO words at all like you originally wanted. Sticking in the few one liners that you did put in, and with all the grammar mistakes, and with it making not SO much sense all the time.... it took a lot away to me. Like.... there was one sentance here and there thrown in where they weren't really needed, and then NOTHING when it would have been nice to know what was going on. Some of the extreme distprted angles made for a confusing read, somewhat like Rtv's last entry with the same problem. Also..... for the most part... like, dont get me wrong, its awesome.... but when most all of the defenders were beaten in like a maximum of 2 panels each... I dont see why it had to be so stretched across 31 pages.... like, if there had been great narration throughout, and it would have added imensly to the drama of it, then that woulda been great.... but this coulda easily been 15 pages.

To the defenders, you guys did great. A FEW parts of the story I disliked and/ or didnt get at all, like : I disliked the flying battle ship.... that whole image with the battle ship on the splash page was very misunderstood I think, and why would this all powerful god fly around in a battle ship? reminded me a bit too much of like a Brainiac or Mongul attack on Metropolis that Superman needed to fly up and stop. Also, in Sons, he like.... joins with shredd...... wtf? and then like, as far as I could tell, nothing happened with that, and then shredd was back to cloak/ small mode later, and Son's really not there at all.... I dont know. In my part of it, which should be done in the next month or so hopefully, i gave all of the defenders a lot more credit than it seems anyone gave them here. Like, i know,  Kojis a god and all... but this is suppost to be the best of the best in void. And even a lot of the defenders just seemed to die off easily. Pon just wasted them all no prob...... coulda been more creative in my eyes too.

It was cool though, and Round 2 ought to be a LOT better still. Congrats to all.

Marley
Artist
259 comments
# 19  
page 29 and 31 are the reasons why pon wins in my book.... little grammar shite, but you easily made up for it

Tronix
Artist
138 comments
# 18  
wow ..i want to join in the next one!!!

Rax
Artist
117 comments
# 17  
You dont need a stinkin dictionary, just get someone to spellcheck your shit( like a mini editor) and then its all good.

PONBIKI
Artist
184 comments
# 16  
sorry for the bad spelling. i even used a fucking dictionary. so if most are spelled wrong blame the dictionary. lay off! nahh i don't care.

SilverLimit
Artist
186 comments
# 15  
Grats, Pon! How you drew so many pages I'll never know, very cool. But you needs ta watch your spelling man, lol. Now to sit back and see who survives the aftermath >_<

Wei Ingnan
Artist
597 comments
# 14  
this was a blast to read and I think it should continue....I was very impressed with the showing by most of the artists.....you outdid yourselves...the storyline of the defenders was an interesting experiment and proved fairly succesful despite the challenges inherent...Pon you did a wicked job....you had a huge task and did beautifully...but I will say that more isn't always better

chunkplex
Artist
184 comments
# 13  
THIS WAS TOO FUCKING MUCH...But I enjoyed reading every single word of this whole thing and everyone has done an excellent job. I gotta get in on this next time around, if there is a next time...I can safely say that Armageddon met the hype (for me anyways)

sauceboy
Artist
99 comments
# 12  
great job everybody!!  pon brought it, and we returned it.  i'm sorry my entry was not 100%...but no excuses.  this thing is amazing to watch and even more so, a pleasure to take part of.  everyone should be commended for their hard work.

zombi and silver are my role models!  top notch work guys.
oh and one other thing.  I am so glad to see mr. kick in action.  i had a feeling you had some silly skills up your sleeve...and i'm glad we were finally able to see 'em.

Rax
Artist
117 comments
# 11  
JEBUS! First off I have to say great job guys, this was alot better than I had anticipated.

Ponbiki: For starters I commend you on your ability to draw so many freaking pages in the time you were given. Absolutely amazing. Now with that said, I was a little dissappoited with the story. Now I know english isn't your first language, but some of the grammar was bad and words were consistently misspelled which was hard to ignore and a little off putting, but again you had a huge task at hand and you delivered. The art on the otherhand was while not superb, definitely satisfactory. I'm surpried you even went with colors. You handled the characters fairl well, but left some to be desired. Great ending, pages 29-31 were perfect.

Endjoi: I thought your entry lacked, writing and artwise. It didn't really pick up until page 5. I know you were trying to lay the foundation for the main story arc, but it still lacked. Not enough action. I felt that whole wandering through the city and reflecting was almost uneccessary. You left it at a good transitional ending though.

Johnny: Absolutly wonderful. I knew you were capable of producing such high calibre work. The story flowed very well. I really enjoyed the action. Great writing too, the story held together nicely.

Jar: Great first page. Its a damned shamed we couldnt get to see anymore of such professional art. I liked what you had in mid for the story. It take balls to kill off your own character to better the story.

Fel: Geez, where did you get such a talent surge from? You Sir, truly understand the language of comics. The pacing was good, the art was good, the writing was good. I like how you made Koji seem almost invincible. A step up from your usual stuff.

Zombi: I enjoyed your entry the most. The art was on par with the writing and the use of characters and their powers was excellent. The ending was mediocre, but the story as a whole worked out great.

Sauceboy. Good job man. I like how you incorporated SHREDD into your story. Its too bad the son/shredd hybrid didn't hold his own too long against the Diety level threat. The only thing I didn't like is that  you made SHREDD seem a little too cooperative. I know he was all for helping Void get rid of the threat, but you could have shown Shredd's reluctance to help a little more.

Silver: Wow, where to begin. Art, characters, story, they worked together great. The art was top notch all the way through. I liked how you handled the characters. I really liked how you applied some physics into the story and made it make sense. Thats a sign of a good writer. I also like your story alot, because it works well as a stand alone. Its very coherent and self-contained. You dissposed of the threat very efficiently and had the best ending/transition.

Dan: Don't worry, its all good.

Big ups to whoever thought of this idea. I'm sure it will get more streamlined and toned in future submissions. I can't wait to see or maybe even join the next one. Once again, great job everybody, but I think we all know who won this one.

zombi
Artist
334 comments
# 10  
*dies*
so much AWESOMENESS. its like, art overdose....
im proud of everybody!!!! and pon that entry was monstorous indeed... and friggin hardcore... and bloody and im gonna get u for that!!! (loved the estrella cameo)
Endjoy u did a great job laying about the foundations and intro, and Mr Kick picked it up awesomely, and man i gotta say both u guys stepped up ur art a notch. too bad for fenix though, but what u had looked awesome. nad p2 already knows i think his entry was just mad. and son that was intersting what u did to shredd, and awesome art too and ill finish later!!! but GOOD JOB EVERYONE

PONBIKI
Artist
184 comments
# 9  
i would not even care if i lost.. i totally was overwhelmed by all your entries.. you guys put up a fucking good ass show. every one put in there best just as i planned.  dis is the coolest thing ever. i hope there are more of them in the future,,  ill talk more about this fights later. it time to sleep. thanks guys for playing.

Kevin Birtcher
Allfather
289 comments
# 8  
If you voted before (tried to) please vote again.

Chao-One
Artist
109 comments
# 7  
Lovely shit from the lot of you's. I love the cameos of myself as well. Johnny I'll be looking forward to having another match with you. The Spring Heel Jack move was wicked. James you know you can make mad money with SHREDD, just keep that in mind.

scarce
Artist
42 comments
# 6  
holy fucking a-hole batman, that was awesome shit. I enjoyed it VERY highly, great job you guys, great job.....wow

Knomer
Artist
87 comments
# 5  
do i submit votes one by one or what, cuz i get an error

vision
Artist
27 comments
# 4  
DOPEEEE. silver, fel, zombi, and johnny blaque's fights were fackin grand. as a whole, i loved the progression of the story. it had its moments of furious action, then into the monstrous with ashito's summons, as well as figuring in shredd and dan's roles in the story, and then the ENDING. holy shit, the ending was good. scratch that, it was GREAT. but i BELIEVE, the scientific term you guys were intending is the TIPLER EFFECT. still, a great and logical way to dispose of a deity. almost feels like Marvel 1602's ending.

Marley
Artist
259 comments
# 3  
zombi, silver and sauceboy... i have to give it to you! those matches were killer... Wish you had put some colors in though brian. This is the best work I've seen from endjoi... Good work you guys! Hats off to freaking zombi and silver.... zombi you really killed this one

RoadMaster
Artist
65 comments
# 2  
EPICO

Kevin Birtcher
Allfather
289 comments
# 1  
LET IT BEGIN!!

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Type: Armageddon
Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Aug 28th, 2004
Votes Cast: 39
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Winner: endjoi, Johnny Blaque, jar, fel/P2, zombi, sauceboy, SilverLimit and DEDieckmann (SkullcapComix)
 

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