Yup. I did horrible on this one. But you know something? >_>; I had a lot of problems. I had intestin, appendix pain, constant migranes, and I also ran away from home! It's a surpirse that I got ANYTHING done but still... I promised Rikun I wouldn't cancel so that's that.
Fantasy: your fight seemed ind of bland; there wasn't a whole lot going on in it. The opening monologue was also a little bit confusing. You can do much better than this and you know it. Still, the art was cool, but good art is only half the battle, yeah? (no pun intended)
Rikun: You had a good fight, and the story was pretty funny. Nice premise for it too. Your dodging poses in page 4 look awkward, though, and not just because they're funny poses. The anatomy looks a little off in some places, like Zil's entrance for instance. Good fight, my vote goes to you.
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