And manofdanger, i hope everything's workin out... there's so much death surrounding you man. Try not to get too drowned in it, i reckon. Chin up dude!
Yeah, sorry about the one-sidedness of the battle... didnt really realize (i was more intent on setting the story). Essentially, the child Hunter did win over Robinson... she just got frustrated and decided to cunningly and unfairly stab him in the 'real world' while he was \"plugged-in\". That Robinson chick is real dastardly!! Tsk tsk!
Thanx fer the kind words peepz. I'm always trying to spin out stories of a different kind and trying to mess wit ur perceptions & expectations. Y'all hav to check her Scar Match with Magician W in the next few days... tackling a genre i'm not usually accustomed to: humor... 7 perverse pages of it...
i really like the robinson character! overall i liked the flow of her story, it had a real suspense feel to it that kinda reminded me of that movie identity (in the way where you're follwing around by the nose and the clarification near the end gives a 'NOW i get it' relief)
too bad we couldn't see what hunter woulda came up with.
good work fanta
Ah, veery interesting Fanta Dude, this one was a very nice easy to follow storyline, good job. Hehe, and it's very ironic that you happen to mention a connection between Jamie and CS. I should probably get back to work on that soon. Manofdanger, be on the lookout!
well, im sorry that i couldnt get it in, when i asked for 2 days i just needed to color the last page and letter it, and then my ex's grandma died and i had to go with her to help. and then someone i know needed my help with her kids, since her brother died. and i got back i thought that it was done with so i didnt write anything.if i knew they just posted it yesterday i would have sent it in when i got back into town...sorry again and it looks good. some holes in my prd stuff. like the guy with the glasses in my fights. he is the head of prd....love eternal sunshine so A+ for that man...lol keep up the work.
Yeah, i don't usually like killing my opponent either. But i felt it was suitable for this story, where i was looking for the most potent anti-climax. Could easily be argued though...
Thanx for ur crits Shade. Always.
Fanta, what are you talking about?! The colours you 'economized' on are fine. Infact I see visible improvement even from your last fight. You gettin' really good! Keep it up.
I do question the event when the opponent gets killed during a normal match. It's not like you can write it into the overall void story and the fighter does officially lives to fight another day. Otherwise, the story is great! Really nice work overall.
Default?? :( *sniff*
Anyways, i had little time... had to \"economize\" the coloring somehow. This story was inspired after watching the film \"Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind\" (and it's got some ideas from \"The Cell\" in there as well.)
Ooookay. i handed my pages a few hours late after the deadline due to unexpected school hold-up that day. I hope it still gets in.
I hope ur copin alrite too manofdanger. These are tight times my friend... tight times.
man o' danger is at 1 page all done! nothin more...but ive been busy...ill do 2 or more tonight while i watch a crappy movie and do the last few pages on my days off proablly...days off are monday and tuesday...
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