Cataclysm : Round 1

Nicely done you two!

I really like the scar you gave in this comic. the bunny ears are super cute.

okay I think the thing that got the biggest chuckle out of me was the "fake Pepsi" on the last page XD something about needing to specify that it's fake without actually avoiding the copyright infringement that is usually the motivating factor behind not using real brands tickled me. also, low key I would love to see bunny King. I think she's super cute with bunny ears! I find the main joke of accidentally bringing the ice to life instead of just frying it is really silly, especially for a magician trying to hide the fact that he uses real magic XD

okay that "yaaaay! peace! peace!" sounds really familiar 👀

I really love this comic, and I feel like it's showing good improvement! the colors are so tasty, and I love the lighting and the meta elements a lot! breaking the screen was a really fun effect. I love King's bloodlust and think it would be really fun to fight her >:3

i like your chaotic energy in this. this was a fun comic

SO I AM STUPID!!! (Couldn't figure out the comment thing cause I didn't know I was logged out.)

I find it hilarious the only scar king leaves with is being pissed off at attending a lackluster show, meanwhile Zkolryk literally gets bludgeoned to death.

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it's kings world, we're just living in it. And its peak

This is wacky, I like it. I love even after getting rabbit ears king is unimpressed haha poor zkolryk

OKAY, why do I feel so much for this little guy haha!! He cannot catch a break omg. His expression on page 2 was great and his failure is honestly so endearing. The scar is so cute : )

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As others have said! I see a lot of improvement!! Really enjoyed the chaotic energy in this one!!

Zkolryk looked pretty cute and small in the comic, and I actually felt bad for him by the end asdasdkj. Really great scar idea tho!! Love everything wrong with these characters

Short, sweet, and humorous, I like the scar idea! Zkolryk’s panic response being “turn everyone into rabbits and pigeons” is a good bit lol. This was a very fun comic!

This comic is showing a lot of art improvement! I particularly like the broken glass effects on the guitar swing (and the following STANDBY panel). The way you drew the scar is very Junji Ito, its pretty cool. Keep it up!

Very simple premise, short and sweet. I loved Zkolryk trying and failing to do magic. Effective and silly, nicely done Bobert!

Loved the angle for the story here, King is both a pleasure to look at and an unhinged character in the best way. I love how simplistic the plot was. The scar was brutal and I would expect nothing less from such a cute character like King

I absolutely love the expressiveness here! Especially on Zkolryk himself - his over the top nature works very well here. Him just transforming people in the audience randomly was a great bit, too :D

Great work! This is definitely one of your stronger comics thus far - I really enjoy the colors, especially Abyss’ palette!

omg I love that Zkolryk's reaction to ice cubes suddenly (and unexpectedly?!) gaining sentience is not to fix the problem, but to cause More Problems by turning the audience into rabbits and pigeons. and giving them rabbit ears lmao. Love that scar idea btw, that's a fun one!!

I really love the way you did colors in this! Strangely, the bright fuchsia works really well. The fuckin emoji shirt took me out XD I do like the setup you have here with it seeming like if you progress, the subsequent scars will be King continuing to take magical aspects from your opponents. Makes me wonder what you've got in mind for the future!

Your best comic yet lmao. Weirdly prescient I did draw him with eyes behind the shades in mine.

I EXPECT HIJINKS OUT OF THIS MATCHUP!