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Making A Note
By Pocketmouse
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Merrik Sanderson
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Final Score: 8.73
A note in time
By Mixiemon
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B Thee
Final Score: 6.21

Comments (13)

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TechnoAlchemist
All-Rounder
2 months ago

(WHAGGG forgot to comment earlier-)

Pocketmouse - OMG?? YOUR COLORS??? Your colors and shading are so pretty and polished to look at, it's genuinely such a delight on the eyes. I love how you handled B Thee's expressions as well! I could tell that you were having fun on page 4, lol.

Mixie - Absolutely loved your entry! Using Merrik's time gun to show off B Thee's different forms throughout time is genuinely such an interesting idea, and I love how it was done here! I'm such a sucker for different time periods coming together and your entry did it in such a cool way :]

Overall, incredible work you two!!


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Bobert
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2 months ago

A lot of intrigue in this one! I hope we can get some answers to some of the hints in this story.

Posted on Merrik Sanderson feature comic by Pocketmouse

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Bobert
All-Rounder
2 months ago

The way B Thee's appearance changes due to her complex relationship with time is very interesting.

Posted on A note in time comic by Mixiemon

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snager
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2 months ago

Pocketmouse: your art is beautiful! I felt like I was picking up a new webcomic for the first time in a while. I was instantly intrigued by the plot of trying to rehome the stray cat. I was also curious about the pink artifact that BThee loves so much. This world felt very textured and lived-in, and he contrast between regular guy and slutty cat people didn't feel out of place at all. you really did Mixie's character justice! Bthee's hips and boobs feel like they have real weight, and her lips are nicely illustrated to look delicate but dangerous.

Mixie, your story was pretty fun. I was interested to understand the mystery of why B Thee changes forms. I was able to follow the idea of Merrik being a kind of time-ranger, but I got confused who he was talking to until around the time he shoots Bthee. pretty fun stuff! Sphinx Bthee looks super fun to draw! And is that Petra from Overwatch? (I know it's a real place but I learnt about it from Overwatch lol)


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roradraws
Inker
2 months ago

I loved the expressions and the dialog, always a pleasure to see someone's different takes on each other's characters and then of course the creator's clearest vision of them. Time being used in comics has always fascinated me, because someone can do it well, or do it poorly, and so far everyone's doing such a great job with the concept! I can't wait to see what comes next.

Posted on A note in time comic by Mixiemon

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roradraws
Inker
2 months ago

I love storylines that loop back in on themselves. This was a treat to read. Art is fantastic, the dialog was phenomenal, and the panel structure was hella fire. You cooked, I commend you.

Posted on Merrik Sanderson feature comic by Pocketmouse

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Cab
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3 months ago

Great job both of you, these were fun great reads,

Mixie-- I loved your use of greytones, your artwork sure has improved a lot since you started here, and this comic is a shinning example of that, good stuff.

Pocket- This was an amazing comic, the colors, the panels, all great stuff, these are some of the best comics of the month so far.


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Putrid
Colorist
3 months ago

That ending left my jaw on the floor goddamn! That is so incredibly smart and at the same time, terrifying and foreboding. The tension was palpable, the subtly shifting color palette was beautiful and your draftsmanship is one of the most impressive I've seen! Gorgeous work overall!

Posted on Merrik Sanderson feature comic by Pocketmouse

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Putrid
Colorist
3 months ago

Very clever use of Merrik's weapon to show B Thee through the ages, she's got a lot going on! I really liked Merrik solving the riddle before B Thee's even done speaking, nice touch

Posted on A note in time comic by Mixiemon

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Pocketmouse
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3 months ago

Ahhhhhh!!! I love the comic you made so much! Thank you for battling me! It was so cool to see all the different titles BThee hold throughout time. Really fascinating how time travel affected her! Tysm!!!

Posted on A note in time comic by Mixiemon

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Mixiemon
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3 months ago

OMG I LOVE HOW YOU DREW SISE and B THEE this was so cute <3

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Alouisse Ver
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3 months ago

I'm sitting, I'm sat, I'm hyped.🍿


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Mixiemon
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3 months ago

A mere note in history, sometime around the 400-500 AD a wealthy merchant died of mysterious circumstances. Their are only two people who know what happened, a time traveler and a demon of Desire.