Yeah...you'd think for someone whose job it is to sneak around and spy on everyone, she'd be a little...well, better at it. However, I think on the other side of the coin, to give her full, FULL possible due would probably make her too overpowered for many fighters....or maybe Im talking out of my ass. Side note on Fushigi, really like the art, but i'm sensing a theme in your battles of, "Winning" Not in the "I'm gonna fight, and win", sense, or the "I'm confident I can and will win this" sense, but in the "I enter the fight knowing not that I can win, nor thinking that I will win, but konwing that there is simply no question of losing" It sorta never gives the person you're fighting against a chance....but then again, it is reasonable, and well justified, so its not actually a problem, just an interesting mindset I myself feel sometimes, so sorry if i offended you......Damn, did I just write all that? Well, good luck to the both of you.
sirk-- o.o hmm.. thanks for pointing this out ^^;;
I'll work on that. *nodnods* Though this one was just her protecting herself, even if the fighting COULD have lasted longer T_T;; *REALLY has to work on that* ^^;
Sorry, didnt mean to be coming down on you or anything; I really love the way you fight, just noticing an interesting quality of your fighting. Really, im not even a fighter here, I shouldn't be starting to lecture you around. ^.^;;
My thoughts exactly, dude.
Anyhow. Fushigi, more backgrounds and details! full them up with things, don't be afraid, you can use photoshop and such for that. I really love the last page's panel. Your noses are turnin out ten times better! keep workin on em and you'll kickass!
ManoDanger, I mentioned this before to you, but those foreheads still seem a lil to small and pointy in the side views. Your fighting scenes seem to motionless, it's as if they just holdin they're leg in the air. lets see some WACKS and some SMACKS and motion lines,aye! You've had a lot of typos lately too, so spell check things before ya save. Keep up with this storyline!!!
Awsome fight you too, this is getting to be a close one.
thanks all for the good thing and what not. it looks good fush, and i wish that you had more BG's in your fight i would have loved to see more of it in there. looks great for doing that one page all freehanded on the comp:-p i thank you again for fighting me and being the one that makes Jamie goes a lil crazy and start her change into "the dark side". im now doing a Hunter and Jamie beyond battle and it shows how she is the mom of hunter and all that good stuff:-d i will get some feed back on the forums. thanks again!!
Don't worry, you'll get a win sooner or later Fushi...
Fushigi: Very good girl, the monotone however leaves me wanting color but no biggie. If anything the story seemed a bit steriotypical to me, it was more enjoyable though. So I'll give the vote to you.
Mano'danger: Also good, art seemed a bit off in few places, but who cares really ;) . If anything the story was slightly confusing seeing as how I figured Jamie Chase to be a bit more on the side of good instead of insane (but when you date a guy like Vencil... hoo boy!) but I'm defenetly looking over that.
Both good comics you two! Keep it up or something?
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