this is such a fun comic, the bright colors and your cute way of drawing and depicting all the characters, even the bad guys, gives me joy. I also appreciate that you are building off of the vcpd robot bigotry haha. I'm really curious to see where this Armageddon 2023 narrative is headed. Congrats on the win!
Posted on Uncertainty Principlecomic by marrionberrypi & TechnoAlchemist
First off good job on both teams making these fun to read comics, especially props to team Plat & Mole to submitting even a incomplete comic is better than no comic, you all did such great work and made such funny comics at times, I look forward to reading more comics from all the artists here.
This was a really fun script, along with a lot of great visual jokes! My personal favorite moment was the teams fighting each other before realizing they were after the same baddie. Very cute lol
Sorry to see it wasn’t finished, but the overall action and conclusion still come through clearly regardless. Both of you did a great job overall and I hope to see you around more, Molerat!
Posted on A Date with a Vampirecomic by Platinumartist & MoleratOfTheHat
Mary Sue and Felix make such a strong team! I really enjoyed the time we spent with your opponents’ characters at the beginning, before your duo steps in to save the day. Your styles complement each other well, and I thought the heroes all came out so likable and charming. It’s especially nice to see Mary Sue’s unique coloring style
One small note for future comics: I noticed that several pages had minor fill issues, such as panels with unfilled white space or small gaps in characters' coloring. It didn’t take away from my overall enjoyment, but those details can add up and are p easy to fix and add a lil polish to the art overall
Posted on Uncertainty Principlecomic by marrionberrypi & TechnoAlchemist
Awesome work guys! This is a really funny comic! It was impressive to me that you were able to land good jokes and silliness on nearly every page, while still keeping the story relatively grounded and without breaking character. Also, thanks so much for your extended cameo of Choko! Your depiction of her having a soft spot for these young heroes is delightfully wholesome. Love it!
Posted on A Date with a Vampirecomic by Platinumartist & MoleratOfTheHat
Wonderful stuff all around. I can't even pick favorites. The colors, the the lines, and I especially liked the facial expressions on all characters. But if I got to pick, pages 4 and 7 sure were a treat when it comes to expressiveness and the fluidity of the action>
Though, I came to appreciate page 15 more for all the subtle details which, once again, I had to reread to pick up on, like Serath sneaking away and Felix (accidentally?) ripping the other robot's arm off.
I also really dig the way you guys interpreted Conduit's design, with the green vest being above the white overalls instead of beneath. Man, that looks so good I might consider changing his design again just for that.
Posted on Uncertainty Principlecomic by marrionberrypi & TechnoAlchemist
On my own part, I want to thank Platinumartist for all his work, and I am really grateful his own contribution. I especially appreciate his contribution on the dialogue. It made things pop in place better than I planned. Most of all it shines on page 12 with the (at least in my head) slight Southern accent and detailed expression on Kismet.
I'd also add that the "Suspect Profiles" are mostly Plat's work, and I wanna thank Techno for pointing out details that even I missed on the first view. That really is the sort of work that only gets better the more you look at it. From what I wrote, I didn't expect the art skill difference between Mary and Conduit to even be noticeable, but Plat managed to make it stand out visually by themself. Kudos for that.
Also, none of this would have been possible without Plat's excellent thumbs. I know some of those dynamic scenes were hard work on you, but you did great and your thumbs did essentially 75% of the work on my part. I really appreciate it.
Posted on A Date with a Vampirecomic by Platinumartist & MoleratOfTheHat
RAHGGG this is such a cute and fun comic!! The writing and banter was especially good - Mole, you really have a strong grasp on comedic writing! "Look at the glint in those large eyes" being paired with Felix's literal hollow expression sent me into hysterics when I first saw it, lol.
Your use of both Choko and Ghost were just great in general. Ghost getting downed by Conduit's radioactive blood was a super cool moment!
I really enjoyed the small details of characterization here, too! Felix carrying the forklift ready to throw down in the background of page 12 was hilarious, but what really sticks to me is the suspect profiles on page 10. It's a subtle detail that I only noticed around my second or third time reading it, but I noticed that they're both using art programs - Mary, who has a good grasp on art already, has a clear and polished suspect sketch, while Conduit clearly struggled, making a bunch of practice doodles and scribbles on the side to try and get used to it. It's a delightful little detail!
Posted on A Date with a Vampirecomic by Platinumartist & MoleratOfTheHat
I just want to put out there that it was quite an experience working alongside MoleratOfTheHat. Although I did drop the ball on some things, I hope everyone who reads our story and gives Mole a round of applause as they are a pretty good writer and artist. I hope to see more from them in the near future. and Thank you Mints for lending me Kismet for this venture.
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this is such a fun comic, the bright colors and your cute way of drawing and depicting all the characters, even the bad guys, gives me joy. I also appreciate that you are building off of the vcpd robot bigotry haha. I'm really curious to see where this Armageddon 2023 narrative is headed. Congrats on the win!
you're setting up something fascinating here and I can't wait to find out what it is!!!! 👀👀👀👀👀👀
First off good job on both teams making these fun to read comics, especially props to team Plat & Mole to submitting even a incomplete comic is better than no comic, you all did such great work and made such funny comics at times, I look forward to reading more comics from all the artists here.
Congrats on the comic!!
This was a really fun script, along with a lot of great visual jokes! My personal favorite moment was the teams fighting each other before realizing they were after the same baddie. Very cute lol
Sorry to see it wasn’t finished, but the overall action and conclusion still come through clearly regardless. Both of you did a great job overall and I hope to see you around more, Molerat!
yay great job on your comic!!
Mary Sue and Felix make such a strong team! I really enjoyed the time we spent with your opponents’ characters at the beginning, before your duo steps in to save the day. Your styles complement each other well, and I thought the heroes all came out so likable and charming. It’s especially nice to see Mary Sue’s unique coloring style
One small note for future comics: I noticed that several pages had minor fill issues, such as panels with unfilled white space or small gaps in characters' coloring. It didn’t take away from my overall enjoyment, but those details can add up and are p easy to fix and add a lil polish to the art overall
Good job on the comics, teams! I’ll try and leave more in depth comments later ✨
The humor was great and you did great job for your first comic mole rat. Yall both did good on this.
I love how mary sue is in a different medium. This was a fun train action scene.
Awesome work guys! This is a really funny comic! It was impressive to me that you were able to land good jokes and silliness on nearly every page, while still keeping the story relatively grounded and without breaking character. Also, thanks so much for your extended cameo of Choko! Your depiction of her having a soft spot for these young heroes is delightfully wholesome. Love it!
Wonderful stuff all around. I can't even pick favorites. The colors, the the lines, and I especially liked the facial expressions on all characters. But if I got to pick, pages 4 and 7 sure were a treat when it comes to expressiveness and the fluidity of the action>
Though, I came to appreciate page 15 more for all the subtle details which, once again, I had to reread to pick up on, like Serath sneaking away and Felix (accidentally?) ripping the other robot's arm off.
I also really dig the way you guys interpreted Conduit's design, with the green vest being above the white overalls instead of beneath. Man, that looks so good I might consider changing his design again just for that.
On my own part, I want to thank Platinumartist for all his work, and I am really grateful his own contribution. I especially appreciate his contribution on the dialogue. It made things pop in place better than I planned. Most of all it shines on page 12 with the (at least in my head) slight Southern accent and detailed expression on Kismet.
I'd also add that the "Suspect Profiles" are mostly Plat's work, and I wanna thank Techno for pointing out details that even I missed on the first view. That really is the sort of work that only gets better the more you look at it. From what I wrote, I didn't expect the art skill difference between Mary and Conduit to even be noticeable, but Plat managed to make it stand out visually by themself. Kudos for that.
Also, none of this would have been possible without Plat's excellent thumbs. I know some of those dynamic scenes were hard work on you, but you did great and your thumbs did essentially 75% of the work on my part. I really appreciate it.
RAHGGG this is such a cute and fun comic!! The writing and banter was especially good - Mole, you really have a strong grasp on comedic writing! "Look at the glint in those large eyes" being paired with Felix's literal hollow expression sent me into hysterics when I first saw it, lol.
Your use of both Choko and Ghost were just great in general. Ghost getting downed by Conduit's radioactive blood was a super cool moment!
I really enjoyed the small details of characterization here, too! Felix carrying the forklift ready to throw down in the background of page 12 was hilarious, but what really sticks to me is the suspect profiles on page 10. It's a subtle detail that I only noticed around my second or third time reading it, but I noticed that they're both using art programs - Mary, who has a good grasp on art already, has a clear and polished suspect sketch, while Conduit clearly struggled, making a bunch of practice doodles and scribbles on the side to try and get used to it. It's a delightful little detail!
I just want to put out there that it was quite an experience working alongside MoleratOfTheHat. Although I did drop the ball on some things, I hope everyone who reads our story and gives Mole a round of applause as they are a pretty good writer and artist. I hope to see more from them in the near future. and Thank you Mints for lending me Kismet for this venture.
The kids are fighting.
time to see who truly has the heart of a hero here