Congrats on a fun battle, guys! Both sides were a joy to read, and it was great to see which part of the dynamics you both decided to focus on
Fuu - With the couple's dark past, I was really invested in how you wrote the dialogue to convey how difficult and serious a decision it would be for them to suddenly take in a child. Always feeding us lore crumbs, which I appreciate <3 Also, Felix looked so tall here, which made me laugh. It really highlights how short the boys actually are! I can’t wait for Cadenza to hear the news. Congrats on suddenly becoming dads
Techno - I love your art style! It’s so cute, and the way you drew the comic was really charming. The colored speech bubbles added a lot to it. I especially liked how much of the emotional impact wasn’t directly in the dialogue but was instead conveyed through your paneling and expressions. The sequence where the boys discover his age, along with the final page, really stood out to me!
I love the dynamic between these characters! You two went a very different way with it but in a similar direction
it's very interesting to see!
Fuu- This was very gripping and dramatic in a super good way. I loved the way the past still affects the boys in such a deep way.
It feels very real and it hurts to see, but it's such a good narrative. It gives their story a lot of substance and flavor. The art is really good as usual, and the tone shifts in this side are somewhat intense- but that is also something very realistic; sometimes that's how it goes. I love we get to see the boys get unpleasant with each other, it's nice to see how they go about it. Fantastic work!
Techno- Absolutely adorable art style, and I do love the choice of the dialogue bubbles being the one colored thing. It gives it such a neat, clean look that I really love. The 'texture' of the entire comic is so nice and comforting to look at, like a massage for the eyes lol! The character interactions are very sweet- I had no idea Felix was so little, ohh my heart. The sweetness in the overall comic makes the ending feel very foreboding. Very nice subtle change of tone, I'm dying to know what happens next!
aaa i appreciate choko and the police catching stray shots lol. I am impressed by how dynamic and varied you were able to visualize the story that is essentially just a short conversation at the boys' house. Lots of fun to see how much of a mess you make their lives haha. But it always manages to become wholesome in the end
this comic is blindingly wholesome! I like your style a lot, the thick lineart combined with thin hatching looks amazing. Felix is an adorable character, I am curious to see what kind of story you have planned for him in the future. Great job!
Posted on Who's Robot Is This?comic by TechnoAlchemist
RAHGGGG I absolutely LOVED your entry!!! Minsoo just dragging Felix into their house like a stray cat is both funny and adorable. OUGHH Minjun's feelings about taking care of another person again (I'm assuming that he's talking about his little sister here) and dehumanizing Felix as a way to avoid his own feelings tooooo,,, Thinking about the three of them makes me feel more emotions than the average human should experience.
Love the way that you drew and characterized Felix! He is my goofy little goober <3 I'm honestly kinda regretting chickening out on their height difference now because it's unbelievably funny to watch Felix be such a shy kid while being double Minjun's size LMAOOO
All in all, incredible work! I have read this comic 4 times already. I will read it more. Thank you for feeding me :]
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Congrats on a fun battle, guys! Both sides were a joy to read, and it was great to see which part of the dynamics you both decided to focus on
Fuu - With the couple's dark past, I was really invested in how you wrote the dialogue to convey how difficult and serious a decision it would be for them to suddenly take in a child. Always feeding us lore crumbs, which I appreciate <3 Also, Felix looked so tall here, which made me laugh. It really highlights how short the boys actually are! I can’t wait for Cadenza to hear the news. Congrats on suddenly becoming dads
Techno - I love your art style! It’s so cute, and the way you drew the comic was really charming. The colored speech bubbles added a lot to it. I especially liked how much of the emotional impact wasn’t directly in the dialogue but was instead conveyed through your paneling and expressions. The sequence where the boys discover his age, along with the final page, really stood out to me!
I love the dynamic between these characters! You two went a very different way with it but in a similar direction
it's very interesting to see!
Fuu- This was very gripping and dramatic in a super good way. I loved the way the past still affects the boys in such a deep way.
It feels very real and it hurts to see, but it's such a good narrative. It gives their story a lot of substance and flavor. The art is really good as usual, and the tone shifts in this side are somewhat intense- but that is also something very realistic; sometimes that's how it goes. I love we get to see the boys get unpleasant with each other, it's nice to see how they go about it. Fantastic work!
Techno- Absolutely adorable art style, and I do love the choice of the dialogue bubbles being the one colored thing. It gives it such a neat, clean look that I really love. The 'texture' of the entire comic is so nice and comforting to look at, like a massage for the eyes lol! The character interactions are very sweet- I had no idea Felix was so little, ohh my heart. The sweetness in the overall comic makes the ending feel very foreboding. Very nice subtle change of tone, I'm dying to know what happens next!
Beautiful work to both of you
aaa i appreciate choko and the police catching stray shots lol. I am impressed by how dynamic and varied you were able to visualize the story that is essentially just a short conversation at the boys' house. Lots of fun to see how much of a mess you make their lives haha. But it always manages to become wholesome in the end
this comic is blindingly wholesome! I like your style a lot, the thick lineart combined with thin hatching looks amazing. Felix is an adorable character, I am curious to see what kind of story you have planned for him in the future. Great job!
Soo in the last panel of page 6 looked so cool.
OK I'm normal enough to leave a comment now, lol.
RAHGGGG I absolutely LOVED your entry!!! Minsoo just dragging Felix into their house like a stray cat is both funny and adorable. OUGHH Minjun's feelings about taking care of another person again (I'm assuming that he's talking about his little sister here) and dehumanizing Felix as a way to avoid his own feelings tooooo,,, Thinking about the three of them makes me feel more emotions than the average human should experience.
Love the way that you drew and characterized Felix! He is my goofy little goober <3 I'm honestly kinda regretting chickening out on their height difference now because it's unbelievably funny to watch Felix be such a shy kid while being double Minjun's size LMAOOO
All in all, incredible work! I have read this comic 4 times already. I will read it more. Thank you for feeding me :]
Local immortal children become uncomfortable ruining the trust of robot child.
How dare you make me feel emotions at this time of day
I will upload a more finished version of my side at some point 😭