NPC Royale : Side B

Gregly: KITTENS?? They look super cute! This is such a cool little comic, watching Gwen's cat run around the city. It honestly feels like a mini anthology, with the world of Void constantly turning as this cat scurries around between its alleyways.

Raltz: Impressive turnout! Love all of the cameos here, and seeing Bach and Cadenza reunite was super sweet!

Radji: Bummer that you couldn't get out as much as you had wanted, but what you have is pretty cool! Love how you capture movement in your line work.

Footini: Nice work! I love all of the character dynamics and the way you utilized the cameos here.

Mixiemon: Gosh, what a cool twist at the end! The jokes and cameos throughout were pretty great, too. Awesome work!

Very nice expressions!

SE ACABO!

HAAHAHA this was GREAT!

Love your style!

I absolutely loved the vibe of this, also I see you are improving in general, so congratulations on that!

This was cool! Congrats on the win!

Im glad you had a lot of fun with this comic! Garland seems to be having the time of his life killing so many people askjadasd I dont know if I should be happy for him or fear him more now that his burnout has been resolved

The sibling dynamics are so good here. I love seeing them in action, and I hope we see more of them in the future! Saiko, you are so cute, and your difficulty with socializing only makes you more endearing to me <3 also ty for including Bach!! Lil guy needed a pool party so bad

It could be because Bach was playing sidekick for Tarot, but I was LOSING it the entire time I was reading this. It’s sooo funny, and you gave Bach and Cadenza such a sweet ending!! They had a better time here than I gave them, hahaha. Love it! Tarot might be just some guy, but I really like that little loser <3

Absolutely love the way we follow White Malkin and bump into everyone in the middle of their own stories. It had some great jokes, and the ending is SO adorable!! I saw your commentary, and UGHHHAwww single dad White Malkin is so cute. Will Gwen get to keep all his magical kittens, or will other magical homes adopt them one day?

Raltz- this is great and feels most like an NPC story- a mundane task that turns into something more exciting. I love the gif with Bach dancing. And I like the intermissions where we see what Envy (and Kano!) are up to. You got an impressive amount of pages done, it's all very readable and I like the expressions and emotions and the sloppy lines on the 'ew' word bubble on p26. Good work!

Radji- I love your little details, their desert house seems like a cozy enough place out in the desert. You couldn't get done but your sketches are still pretty readable, I like how you get right to the action. I fell in love with Franck and Lilou, it'd be neat to see some more from them soon.

Footini- It's the pool party comic! I like how it's too cold for swimming in yours as well. I love how you managed to include the characters from the other bracket! I like the detail of Saiko twisting Sizar's nipple while they fight, and how Satraxia wasn't mad about them fighting, but about how they weren't fighting ferociously enough. Lots of fun!

BuggyPumpkin- Sorry you couldn't turn in, I was looking forward to it!

Mixiemon- I like the scene and backgrounds in this one and the little vignettes of all the characters. I like how only Garland can see White Malkin it's a fun idea! And I love how dark it got at the end. I thought all the 'sweetie~'s were suspicious!

Me- I love doing comics with lots of opponents. I wanted to fit them all together but ended up with funnypart>seriouspart. Anyway the idea is White Malkin was the last of his kind so he went out to meet some lady cats and have babies until he finally made some magic kittens eventually! (I wondered if there should be a momma cat but my wife said it's cuter if he's a single dad.) It's a little cold in that alley but they'll be safe, don't worry~

Beeg Sam in the background like a damn parade float!!! XD

Thanksies Batty. The whole “Sweetie” is meant to be a hypno trigger, Juniper repeating it so Garland can get into the headspace and fall deeper into the hypnosis.

Ooooh, I was not expecting that ending 👀 there were some really funny moments throughout, though, especially with Garland's expressions lol. I can really tell you had fun with them! Unfortunately, I think you kind of overdid it with the 'Sweetie's and 'Honey's--I think you could've gotten away with just having Juniper and Garland use a pet name for each other maybe once per page, instead of at least once per speech bubble, because it was so frequent that it kinda became distracting ^^; That said, the final page was really kickass, especially with all the weirdness that was going on with Juniper's eyes! Juniper and Garland are truly made for each other in the worst of ways lmao

The winter pool party is such a fun thing. Also cool seeing their dynamics

This was a really fun look into the lives of these two siblings, which in turn revealed some fun things about Satraxia! the pool party in the middle of winter was a really funny idea lol

It looks like you had a really neat idea going into this, I'm just sad that life hit you to where you couldn't finish :( that first page is really good looking though!!

I gotta agree with the others, the Earthbound references were super fun lmaooooo. At times this comic felt a bit like a fever dream, but I think that's kind of what you were going for so if that's the case you nailed it XD I imagine going anywhere in Void is a bit of a fever dream tbh

This was such a fun little romp! It was really sweet how you featured all your opponents and used White Malkin as a way to connect these diverse lives within the city. And that ending! White Malkin has bbies!!! teeny magic kittens!!!! 👀

shame life happened but cool to see what you submitted~

The earthbound stuff was awesome and this was fun.

The ending is so adorable, white maulkin is such a cutie

The ending is so adorable, white maulkin is such a cutie

I liked the Earthbound gag.

Another comic that touches upon the zodiac! A real "I have two pennies" moment lmao.

An average shopping trip in Void City. Can't grab the groceries without at least 5 random encounters

Kinda surprised he knows anything about Earth's western zodiac.

I would have loved for luck to be on your side.

This was a nice read, went in many figurative and literal alleys.