NPC Royale : Side A

CRYING IN THE CLUB RN 😭 😭 😭 Bach is such a sweetie, and Octavia really is proving herself to be an EXCELLENT candidate for villain of the year 🤬🤬🤬 I'm still processing the absolute malice from that woman... Can't wait to see Bach and Cadenza reunited 🥺

KANO OMG XD I love her!!! This comic made me burst out laughing and I hope we get to see more of Kano soon 👀

Snowy: A fun little comic strip! Love the old newspaper-type texture, and the suddenness of her question caught me off guard, lol.

Linclair: GODDD this silly little drum makes me ILL- Absolutely loved this comic! The textures and colors were all super interesting. I haven't read much of Cadenza's comics, but this managed to make me super invested in her via another perspective.

Selevan: As always, I love your inks and textures. Having it all shown from the same perspective was a super interesting stylistic choice.

Platinum: Super interesting to see some of Zavan's conflicting dynamics here!

Boogidi: It's pretty cool to see you experiment with your style like this! The first page was especially striking, with all the wild colors and lines.

Rockman: Love these silly worm wizards, lol. Seeing a bit more of Mob's dynamic with Mythra was a fun little addition, too!

I will properly comment later, but I LOVED this.

THIS IS PEAK ART!

Vey interesting story!

Vey interesting story!

I love silent comics.

HAhaha, what a fun interaction.

This has so much whimsy in it! The way you draw everything is so charming, and I loved the final design for the Wormy mages! Mob not ratting them out was really sweet. A true bro

Love seeing the traditional pages! So colorful and the egg puns were eggcellent

Love getting to see Zavan’s pov, and I felt so bad for him once he realized what happened to his dad : ( Saal’s cameo was p fun as well!

Love the concept for this! It’s cozy to see the passing of time as she works her shift. The way all types of people come in for a cup of coffee. Simple but so full of life.

Kano is so cute, and I love how unhinged her interviews can be! Looking forward to any of her future promos <3

I was not EGGspecting this! XDXD Thanks for the advertisement! Good job!

This is very impressive for 2 weeks! It is amazing storytelling with a lot of emotion! Very polished artstyle. Good job!

I liked this alot because of that awesome bg! Very detailed, very good job!

This was an intriguing story. I liked the drama in it. This is good world building in here. Good job!

This was a fun story, the mystery is solved! I like how you did the eyes on the worm mage. Good job!

Thank you, I am surprised everyone likes these trads so much! I may try and do more trads in the future. :)

Snowy- Very cute, your lines are so clean! It'll be fun to see more from Kano

Linclair- Great tragic story, I didn't expect it to be so sad so that was fun. Great evil mom and I agree the 11th page with Cadenza growing up is great!

Salevan- I like the idea and the detailed coffee shop background you made! This seems like a peaceful day there, I bet sometimes a void coffee shop can get real raucous.

Platinumartist- This is some neat backstory showing Zavan being slightly distrustful of Viro at first. I didn't expect to see Saal! I like the longshot of the city burning, followed by a close-up of hands on bars in a dark cell.

BoogidiBzdo- Those first couple pages look amazing! I'd definitely like to see more traditional art from you-- it's bonkers but it never gets confusing or unreadable.

Rockman- Very fun read, an interesting look into an odd magical place in Void which is full of odd magical places. I like on page four where the little worm is pointing with its head in Mob's hand. Great work on all the backgrounds!

Wizard spotted!!

It's so ominous! and forshadowy!!

I love how Kano is such a lil shit! She is perfect

These were so fun to read! You all did great!!

SNOWY - I love how short, sweet and effective this was! Art is beautiful as usual and I love that we can see how cheeky Kano is. Your render and colors are so clean and crisp, makes me want to eat them!

LINCLAIR - I'm blown away with how much detail and how much story you wrote for Bach. It's such an incredibly tragic story seen from another point of view. Masterful writing and the art and greyscale is gorgeous. The way you portrayed passage of time and how Candeza changed through the years was so bittersweet. I hope the two can reunite someday

SELEVAN - Very sweet and simple, I love how all sort of characters stop by to breathe and get a shred of normalcy in the background. I really liked how the shot was static but so many different things were happening as the day went

PLATINUMARTIST - It's pretty interesting to see things from an NPC's point of view on how important stuff can potentially go down. I'd say that Saal took the spotlight from Zavan a little though.

BOOGIDY-I am absolutely amazed at how dynamic and colorful your (mostly) traditional (!!!!) comic is. You always bring something so unique and special to the table, there is no one that does what you do. I have such a deep admiration on how genuine and joyful your art is every time. Keep going Boogidy!!

ROCKMAN - This was such a fun read! I love how stylish Mythra and the lil worms look in your artstyle! The expressions are so fun (specially on page 3) and the backgrounds are lookin real good! I LOVE MOB AND MADD TRASH DIVING...the treasure hunting with these two yess! And also that last page with the colored worm in it- there's something about it that is so incredibly cool and appealing to me, it draws me in!

Ohmygod I love the designs they're so cute! Very nice job with this comic! Looking forward to more !!

This was so much fun, the colors were chaotic, in a good way! Very artistic and fun this was

Oh this is fun, im interested! Lizards, dinosaurs, magic, heck yeah!

Very cozy and cute, nice! Short simple and sweet

Beautiful comic, your art style and shading is so satisfying to look at! Didn't expect to feel emotional a bit about a lil drum :,]

Charming lil comic

i like the silent comic and its cool to see a chill day in void.

Your art is special and i love how wild you get with the colors. I def wanna see more traditional stuff.

this could be a fun series. Also the way you draw her is cute

great job with this comic, i really like your character and having the magic be purple is fun.

What amazing writing and depiction of such a horrible mother. Im excited for bachs next move.

You help save the world one time and suddenly everyone starts thinking you're reliable

The usual assortment of Void denizens, to be sure

This is a truly impressive amount of effort for a two week battle. The visuals are stunning and the writing is incredibly sharp. Your quality of work is astounding

De Vermis Mysteriis got solved by an honorable liar!

The dinosaur war is not gonna be without blood.

Very off kilter. You should do more traditional work on a longer deadline.

hmmmm...Mobkey :P

That panel was seriously my favorite, though I enjoyed how you drew the lil wormy guy throughout the whole thing! I do kiiiinda feel like youput a little too much focus on Mob and not enough on the worm mage, but at the same time it was still a cute lil story!

All in a day's work!

The people demand to know, Celif!

What a contemptible woman.

The traditional bits of your comic are really fun in a kinda trippy way; I can really tell you had fun with it!

Oooh, drama!! I really like the story setup here, I can tell you really pushed yourself to get this big thing out. The Saal reveal was really fun, I didn't see it coming! Interested in seeing where things go from here hehe

Lmao at the punchline. Yes, Kano is adorable.

I really like how cozy this whole thing feels, and I thought it was a really fun choice to put most of the focus on the background characters! just a fun lil montage <3

LMAOOO I didn't see that ending coming, 10/10. The art style is really cute too, I've never seen Celif look so adorable! I feel like you should do more of these short little mini comics, they're fun :3

EXCUSE YOU HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME HAVE FEELINGS ABOUT A GODDAMN DRUM

also I need to throw Cadenza's mother off a tower now.

Your grayscales are fantastic, and all the art in general is just so tasty :D almost makes up for the emotional damage you subjected me to lmao