Well, I don't l ike taking sides buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut......Go ME! haha..what? I'm in the wrong fight? ah...I see. Go fushie!! <3 Give a good fight, BOTH of you.
Wow I do? o.o; cool! ^^
Um.. I may need an extention, because this hurricane might knock my power out for a while. I'll have Lune call and let y'all know.
Shoot! That's right! Fushigi's also in Florida! Well, in any case, let's both do our best. Toast, if you can hear us, I think we both need an extention on this fight. Don't wanna default at all.
Shoot! That's right! Fushigi's also in Florida! Well, in any case, let's both do our best. Toast, if you can hear us, I think we both need an extention on this fight. Don't wanna default at all.
Fushigi: First things first, STOP doubting your damn art, Kim. I very much so dislike it when ya do that. You ARE truely talented, and it is always an honour to draw with you when you come over to see me. I've seen your next fight, so I'm sure the storyline on this one is just a start- but it's okay. Be sure to not leave so much blank spaces in the background. We coulda went for some bistanders in the fight scenes. but I know you too were dealing with the hurricanes, so thats okay.lol wheres my shoes.
Itami: Galvo's lil trainee. <3 More and more details! There's no folds in the clothing. Take a look at some of those How to draw Books, whether they're the ANIME ones or CHRISTOPHER HART ones. It don't matter. Try making your characters seem less kiddish too. Wonderful sense of humor, too Trax.
Both of you, great first fights.
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Wow, I thought they were both funny ^^ The beer being added to your inventory made me laugh ^^;; That was cool.
I can't comment on art, since I sux, but I did like Itami's story better. The random challenge/battle was ok thou, just not as funny ^_^;;
Friendliest battle EVER.
Rikun - funny stuff. The storytelling basics were there - good job. Keep practicing your art and you'll be great.
Fushigi - great art and coloring. Needed some more backgrounds, though. Try and have at least one establishing shot for each change of setting. Solid work, otherwise.
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