Both of you guys came out with such fun and silly comics!
Pizza: Love the dynamic between Rod and Neo here, lol. One character taking the situation seriously and the other not thinking much of it at all is one of my favorite comedy tropes.
Raltz: Neo and Moa are so disrespectful it's hilarous, lmao. I can't tell what's funnier - them constantly interrupting Rod, or the fact that he just can't stop taking the bait.
I have vague deja vue's about leaving comments that weren't super positive on your comics before. But I had to comment on this one to give you some props because I actually loved this!
I loved how you incorporated a lot of different types of creative storytelling into the story, like the bit that switched to videogame style for a flashback. That was great! And usually, I know you add a lot of pop culture references into your stories and I'm usually too much of a boomer to get most of them. But this time there was a good balance and I could actually follow hah!
You definitely leveled up since your last project and I just wanted to leave a comment to encourage you to keep going as I can definitely see growth and your "voice" starting to really emerge.
This was actually a hard match up to vote on because these are both very good entries!
Great job! Your writing is always so good! Even though the art isn't super polished, it actually compliments your stories so well. It actually adds to the experience of reading your stories. You're one of my fav storytellers on the site right now. No BS.
Posted on Rod Attempts The No Longer Safe Safe Housecomic by Pizza Man
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Both of you guys came out with such fun and silly comics!
Pizza: Love the dynamic between Rod and Neo here, lol. One character taking the situation seriously and the other not thinking much of it at all is one of my favorite comedy tropes.
Raltz: Neo and Moa are so disrespectful it's hilarous, lmao. I can't tell what's funnier - them constantly interrupting Rod, or the fact that he just can't stop taking the bait.
her face still looks pretty good all things considered 6/10
I have vague deja vue's about leaving comments that weren't super positive on your comics before. But I had to comment on this one to give you some props because I actually loved this!
I loved how you incorporated a lot of different types of creative storytelling into the story, like the bit that switched to videogame style for a flashback. That was great! And usually, I know you add a lot of pop culture references into your stories and I'm usually too much of a boomer to get most of them. But this time there was a good balance and I could actually follow hah!
You definitely leveled up since your last project and I just wanted to leave a comment to encourage you to keep going as I can definitely see growth and your "voice" starting to really emerge.
This was actually a hard match up to vote on because these are both very good entries!
Great job! Your writing is always so good! Even though the art isn't super polished, it actually compliments your stories so well. It actually adds to the experience of reading your stories. You're one of my fav storytellers on the site right now. No BS.
I need to draw NeoPetra.
Rod is such a dork, is there anything he can get right!?
That WASN'T safe! Lmao hahaha
Neopetra is a 420 out of 69.
For those keeping score at home this is the third building Rod has destroyed.
I mean, Husk liked Neopetras face so much it decided to keep it. Take that as you will
Briggs is adding this incident to Rods permanent record
Man, you both crack me up. And I’m so honored that Moa appeared! Great work from both of you lmfao
Damn Raltz you locked in for this one!
[[PIZZA MAN HAS RATED NEOPETRA AS A ONE]]]
Wait...that counts?!
Ohhh, I love bugs so much!