The Art style for this is, so, so, great. My only weird issue is the colors, sometimes it's a bit *too* hard to see the difference in the grey scaling but that very much could be just me! If wanted, maybe you could do a slight airbrush on the edges where you shade in the character underneath the lineart to help bring out some of the characters? Or a slight lighter outline, something like that could help if wanted, other than that very fun fight!
Thank you for the feedback and thanks for the tips I do wanna do more traditional I was going to use an ink pen as well I’ll try that more next time and the advice you gave me thank you!! SirJelly
Posted on Gusano de la Murete featurecomic by gojipoint
By and large this is a decent encounter. Decent combat, well drawn, very well polished, but it desperately needs more contrast between objects. Most objects are shaded in a very similar value of gray, and that makes things hard to distinguish guise, despite how clean your l8nework and spot blacks are. You really have to push the lighter and darker tones to makes the different elements of your scenes clearly distinguishable, and that will make it easier for the reader to parse what is happening, and will serve your inks and spot blacks much better, because they really are excellent
As someone who has regularly photographed my own pencil art, I know it can be hard to do without a scanner, but if you have the time I implore you to make sure that the entire page is in focus as much as possible when photographing. Especially when the text is hand written as well. There's several places where the text begins to blur out a bit and when some of the oencil drawing starts to blend together due to the unfocused camera, and that can lose you a lot when you're working in pencils. And this is a very solidly drawn comic and I'd hate for it to score lower than it should for a technical issue rather than any actual issue with the artwork
Posted on Gusano de la Murete featurecomic by gojipoint
I really love how you did Gusano in your style Cyber 🤩🤩 it’s crazy I didn’t know you were going to do an underground cave as well! Great minds think alike!! I hope you enjoy my part as well!! I’ll still ink it and all but it was fun facing against tremora love drawing her!!!
I liked the expressions, the movement conveyed - Was a little hard to follow due to the lighting on the pages, and some of the dialog is hard to make out. But this was a fun read! Wasn't expecting the human to play such a huge role in the fight!
Posted on Gusano de la Murete featurecomic by gojipoint
This art is so unbelievably polished, I wish I knew your secret! The speed paint was a nice glimpse into the process. Tremora is awesome as always and I loved how you put them on equal footing for most of the fight with it being in Gusano's domain underground. At times it was difficult to follow where everyone was but none-the-less I loved EVERY second of the fight c:
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The Art style is really fun, and for a comic on paper I think you did great with all the paneling and structures!
The Art style for this is, so, so, great. My only weird issue is the colors, sometimes it's a bit *too* hard to see the difference in the grey scaling but that very much could be just me! If wanted, maybe you could do a slight airbrush on the edges where you shade in the character underneath the lineart to help bring out some of the characters? Or a slight lighter outline, something like that could help if wanted, other than that very fun fight!
very hard to pick a winner here, for both comics i felt the art was very well drawn, but had some trouble following the flow of the action.
You did well with the illustration. There's some level of weight I can feel with the lineart, especially the background. Nice choreo as well!
Great job you two!
Thank you for the feedback and thanks for the tips I do wanna do more traditional I was going to use an ink pen as well I’ll try that more next time and the advice you gave me thank you!! SirJelly
By and large this is a decent encounter. Decent combat, well drawn, very well polished, but it desperately needs more contrast between objects. Most objects are shaded in a very similar value of gray, and that makes things hard to distinguish guise, despite how clean your l8nework and spot blacks are. You really have to push the lighter and darker tones to makes the different elements of your scenes clearly distinguishable, and that will make it easier for the reader to parse what is happening, and will serve your inks and spot blacks much better, because they really are excellent
As someone who has regularly photographed my own pencil art, I know it can be hard to do without a scanner, but if you have the time I implore you to make sure that the entire page is in focus as much as possible when photographing. Especially when the text is hand written as well. There's several places where the text begins to blur out a bit and when some of the oencil drawing starts to blend together due to the unfocused camera, and that can lose you a lot when you're working in pencils. And this is a very solidly drawn comic and I'd hate for it to score lower than it should for a technical issue rather than any actual issue with the artwork
Forgot to mention Gusano can burrow through any terrain this includes magma(lava)
I really love how you did Gusano in your style Cyber 🤩🤩 it’s crazy I didn’t know you were going to do an underground cave as well! Great minds think alike!! I hope you enjoy my part as well!! I’ll still ink it and all but it was fun facing against tremora love drawing her!!!
I liked the expressions, the movement conveyed - Was a little hard to follow due to the lighting on the pages, and some of the dialog is hard to make out. But this was a fun read! Wasn't expecting the human to play such a huge role in the fight!
This art is so unbelievably polished, I wish I knew your secret! The speed paint was a nice glimpse into the process. Tremora is awesome as always and I loved how you put them on equal footing for most of the fight with it being in Gusano's domain underground. At times it was difficult to follow where everyone was but none-the-less I loved EVERY second of the fight c:
Marcelo 😭😭😭
Tremora: SOPA DE GUSANO, UMA DELICIA!
BUG BATTLE BUG BATTLE BUG BATTLE 👏👏👏