Finally in the right professional headspace to give my comments! First of all you guys really popped off, You three did an outstanding job. in this round 2 entry the three way fight really stands out the most cause' not only are these visually stylish and clean but also the contrast of the story too, and it works perfectly well as 3 different scenarios.
Thewkhangkbon, your comic is incredibly clean and your unique artstyle made it worked. The fight showing that in a 3 was fight, a helping hand for one of the combatants helps finishes a type of fight that prolongs in terms of attrition, unity is all it takes. Behemoth's special divine attack in the 3rd act makes the perfect conclusion! a good ending overall and an intriguing cliffhanger.
DoeFR, in this three-way fight your story here stands out as the most intriguing, from start to finish the fight is well made, a coordinated fight to stop a living nightmare sets the mood that Nohuron is truly an existential threat and poses a stronger antagonism in the story. The portal sequence fight is the coolest thing I've ever seen here, and Claude being morally challenged by the Nomad at the end is so compelling, shows that despite even their unity in this fight, their fundamental differences is still there. The ending makes me excited for more future works from you!
Roradraws, your comic works so well in the PoV of Nohuron, although the comic initially began with Claude and Roel as Nomad and Behemoth came for the save, Nohuron displays how truly dangerous she is when her cunning nature is fully utilized. I've always looked forward to the unique ability it was hyped up and to see it finally shown was jawdropping. This is a win that favors Nohuron because even a lack of coordination is shown, her element definitely works best when all enemies are at eachother's throats, and that is the fighting chance Nohuron needed: Unity is too late, and their synergy is disorganized. That small fracture is all it takes.
Nohuron's enemy making a team up is nice! Unity is the most fascinating thing to witness, BUT since the match is essentially supposed to be a 1v1v1, your comic follows the true three way fight because the 3 were not picking sides, and this proves that it takes real team play effort to truly defeat an intelligent nightmare like Nohuron.
You've got a very clean artstyle and it's been working well for you so far, especially with your clearly well thought out panel compositions. I know you've tagged this as not desiring critique but I think it really needs to be said, you really should learn to draw eyes. For a lot of your own characters its no big deal, and the red Nomad especially works well with this particular stylistic trait, but on Claude it doesn't feel quite right and honestly the lack of actual eyes on Roel is pretty jarring
Posted on The Winged Behemoth and The Nomad featurecomic by thewkhangkbon
This is a very solid action comic. 3 way matches can be a challenge to integrate all 3 characters into a plotline but that seems to have presented no problem to you (or any of the members of this battle, honestly). Managing to balance all three characters so well and still find time to expand upon Nohuron without it feeling out of place or forced is definitely a feat.
You really pushed this match-up to it'd limit with this one! Fantastic use and integration of all the characters, that that ending is a direction for Claude I absolutely was not expecting
you three are NUTS. all this work in just 2 weeks? absurd.
I prayed to the OCT gods that if I got eliminated in round 1, that I wanted to see the Nomad and Behmoth vs. Claude and Roel. and they answered my prayer. then they put a cherry on top by making all 3 possible dimension hoppers interact. of course, if I REALLY want to see what would happen I should just make my own commic about it.
each of y'all's takes on this play of characters was interesting in its own right! I'll get y'all your indivudual crits in a bit!
This. This was INSANE. You did some of the most impressive shit I've ever seen with a teleporting enemy. You really took advantage of her gateways and unpredictability in the movements. I also LOVE how you depicted the inside of her void dimension, you definitely read up about her and how she's constantly stashing body parts in there so she can continue growing. The fight choreography was insane and the dialog fits both speaking parties! And oh my god, this extended lore with Claude and the other scientist... I WANT MORE!
I loved the weight and impact of the hits in this! It almost feels like Nohuron is feeling out the battle with Behemoth, figuring out what works and what doesn't! That final hit that looks like it's cracking reality made my jaw drop! Every panel made me salivate, good job my guy!
Posted on The Winged Behemoth and The Nomad featurecomic by thewkhangkbon
Even after the fight was over, there are still scenes exploring deeper into the story, and whatever Claude may have to deal with in future stories is intriguing!
Lastly, THE FLOATING ISLANDS! How beautiful it is with your art style! The civilians caught me off guard lol, but it's interesting the stuff you came up with the environment.
The way you carry the narative from Claude and Roel's perspective towards to eventual teaming up with Behemoth and Nomad, is incredible. Then immediately Nohuron showing up, ready to rumble.
I'm amazed how you illustrate the combat scene, as they were changing locations/dimensions. The choreo and the progression of the fight is so well done. Behemoth is struggling a lot to help Roel and dealing with the red world is fantastic.
Another comic that I didn't expect to go this way. The fight was so cool, the colors are very nice and very creepy as it goes on. Really enjoyed reading this one!
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Damn, what a round!
Thewkhang, your action shots never disappoint! Really liked pg10 especially.
Rora, wasn't expecting the copy ability from Nohuron, that was extremely hype
DoeFr, love how your comics contain such a compelling narrative, leaves me wanting more
Truly inspiring work from all involved
You all did such a fantastic job in two weeks time! These were all such great reads!
Finally in the right professional headspace to give my comments! First of all you guys really popped off, You three did an outstanding job. in this round 2 entry the three way fight really stands out the most cause' not only are these visually stylish and clean but also the contrast of the story too, and it works perfectly well as 3 different scenarios.
Thewkhangkbon, your comic is incredibly clean and your unique artstyle made it worked. The fight showing that in a 3 was fight, a helping hand for one of the combatants helps finishes a type of fight that prolongs in terms of attrition, unity is all it takes. Behemoth's special divine attack in the 3rd act makes the perfect conclusion! a good ending overall and an intriguing cliffhanger.
DoeFR, in this three-way fight your story here stands out as the most intriguing, from start to finish the fight is well made, a coordinated fight to stop a living nightmare sets the mood that Nohuron is truly an existential threat and poses a stronger antagonism in the story. The portal sequence fight is the coolest thing I've ever seen here, and Claude being morally challenged by the Nomad at the end is so compelling, shows that despite even their unity in this fight, their fundamental differences is still there. The ending makes me excited for more future works from you!
Roradraws, your comic works so well in the PoV of Nohuron, although the comic initially began with Claude and Roel as Nomad and Behemoth came for the save, Nohuron displays how truly dangerous she is when her cunning nature is fully utilized. I've always looked forward to the unique ability it was hyped up and to see it finally shown was jawdropping. This is a win that favors Nohuron because even a lack of coordination is shown, her element definitely works best when all enemies are at eachother's throats, and that is the fighting chance Nohuron needed: Unity is too late, and their synergy is disorganized. That small fracture is all it takes.
Nohuron's enemy making a team up is nice! Unity is the most fascinating thing to witness, BUT since the match is essentially supposed to be a 1v1v1, your comic follows the true three way fight because the 3 were not picking sides, and this proves that it takes real team play effort to truly defeat an intelligent nightmare like Nohuron.
Really interesting story, I love seeing how Nohuron adapts to her opponents! The art was quite good too, nice work!
Lovely work, I really enjoyed how a lot of the fight was taking place in the background! The colors you do for comics look great!
I can’t believe the drawing time was only 2 weeks? You all did an amazing job and I am very impressed!
You've got a very clean artstyle and it's been working well for you so far, especially with your clearly well thought out panel compositions. I know you've tagged this as not desiring critique but I think it really needs to be said, you really should learn to draw eyes. For a lot of your own characters its no big deal, and the red Nomad especially works well with this particular stylistic trait, but on Claude it doesn't feel quite right and honestly the lack of actual eyes on Roel is pretty jarring
This is a very solid action comic. 3 way matches can be a challenge to integrate all 3 characters into a plotline but that seems to have presented no problem to you (or any of the members of this battle, honestly). Managing to balance all three characters so well and still find time to expand upon Nohuron without it feeling out of place or forced is definitely a feat.
You really pushed this match-up to it'd limit with this one! Fantastic use and integration of all the characters, that that ending is a direction for Claude I absolutely was not expecting
you three are NUTS. all this work in just 2 weeks? absurd.
I prayed to the OCT gods that if I got eliminated in round 1, that I wanted to see the Nomad and Behmoth vs. Claude and Roel. and they answered my prayer. then they put a cherry on top by making all 3 possible dimension hoppers interact. of course, if I REALLY want to see what would happen I should just make my own commic about it.
each of y'all's takes on this play of characters was interesting in its own right! I'll get y'all your indivudual crits in a bit!
This. This was INSANE. You did some of the most impressive shit I've ever seen with a teleporting enemy. You really took advantage of her gateways and unpredictability in the movements. I also LOVE how you depicted the inside of her void dimension, you definitely read up about her and how she's constantly stashing body parts in there so she can continue growing. The fight choreography was insane and the dialog fits both speaking parties! And oh my god, this extended lore with Claude and the other scientist... I WANT MORE!
I loved the weight and impact of the hits in this! It almost feels like Nohuron is feeling out the battle with Behemoth, figuring out what works and what doesn't! That final hit that looks like it's cracking reality made my jaw drop! Every panel made me salivate, good job my guy!
Funny how you made Behemoth's enterance literally getting his arm biten off by Nohuron and Roel lol!
The way you made Claude attack Behemoth, then use their banter to give time for Nohuron to digest Behemoth's arm and mimic his style!
Finally the ending. It's interesting how you made Nohuron escapes *wink*.
Even after the fight was over, there are still scenes exploring deeper into the story, and whatever Claude may have to deal with in future stories is intriguing!
Lastly, THE FLOATING ISLANDS! How beautiful it is with your art style! The civilians caught me off guard lol, but it's interesting the stuff you came up with the environment.
The way you carry the narative from Claude and Roel's perspective towards to eventual teaming up with Behemoth and Nomad, is incredible. Then immediately Nohuron showing up, ready to rumble.
I'm amazed how you illustrate the combat scene, as they were changing locations/dimensions. The choreo and the progression of the fight is so well done. Behemoth is struggling a lot to help Roel and dealing with the red world is fantastic.
Another comic that I didn't expect to go this way. The fight was so cool, the colors are very nice and very creepy as it goes on. Really enjoyed reading this one!
Oh I was not expecting this battle, genuinely terrifying of a character. She's so menacing, loved reading this comic!
Very exciting!! Im still amazed how you are able to color everything in such short time, looks great.
Very exciting!! Im still amazed how you are able to color everything in such short time, looks great.
A 3 way!? And the 3 opponents are solid contestants, good luck all.
Holy shit this is an extremely hype three way!!! I can't wait to see what y'all make!!!