Incredible work, all three of you! You guys came so close to a three-way tie by how equally good your comics are, lol
Fuu: Great storytelling! While the first half was good (watching 19 just get smacked in the face was funny and him surrounded by all the crows was ominous), the real standout here was the second half. The suspense and silent dread at the aftermath of such a horrific event was built up so well that it genuinely had me holding my breath!
Tgood: I love your utilization of all the characters here! It was incredibly nice to see them all bounce off of each-other in such a natural way. Your use of values makes the greyscale look stellar, too!
Spartan: Once again, great artwork! I honestly really love the way that you capture movement in some panels. Seeing you cameo some of the other characters was very fun, too!
SPARTAN GREAT JOB WITH YOUR COMIC!!! It is an honor to share 2nd place with you, man.
You have such a great sense of camera work/angles and with the 1 panel format you had going, it felt like I was watching a movie as I was reading. Very cinematic. It's a unique take and one I very much vibe with.
Like others said, I loved how you utilized the round 1 aftermaths to have one big climactic battle between the finalists (I lol'd at Guglielmo getting reprimanded for supposedly drinking with a "minor"). Choko's such a badass here and Minjun....well, you got his reckless ass down p good. Confronting someone on his own cause they dared to touch one of his babies AND throwing himself off a building if it means taking them down with him? Not very smart decisions but what's more dumb decisions to his long list of dumb decisions. Using his crows as a safe landing though? Now that's both smart AND badass. Thank you for giving me ideas how to utilize more of his murder squad for future stuff hehe
I am a little curious at the end tho....Was that really Soo at the end there or is the intruder crow up to no good at the end there? Just what is the intruder crow planning on doing now that it's infiltrated the house? What is the song that Soo or whoever was singing cause tbh, I'm not good with recognizing songs based on lyrics ahha
ANYWAY GREAT JOB AGAIN. Your comic was such a fun read and I love all the action and dynamic shots you had going on. Really inspirational ngl. I hope there's more 19 comics in the future! I'd love to do a rematch with him at some point ;)
Posted on 19 vs Choko and Min-Juncomic by SpartanArts19
TGOOD CONGRATS ON WINNING!!! You really earned it ꉂ(ˊᗜˋ*)
I screamed a little bout it on the discord but I ABSOLUTELY LOVED HOW YOU CAPTURED MY BOYS!! From the characterization esp with Soo (I am esp impressed considering how little I've depicted of him so far like you captured his internal cash out and the instinctive cowering behind Minjun so well hehe) to the boy's relationship overall. Their banter and taking turns sharing the one braincell they have between them. I gushed so hard when I saw them do their "fist bump". It really nailed down their bromance relationship that often gets over shadowed by the romance aspect. I was just blown away overall by how on point you got them (≧ᗜ≦)ᡣ𐭩
As for my other thoughts, I also LOVE the set up you have here and how you incorporated every character in your comic. From the boy's introductions to 19's entrance from behind the vault with his usual witty commentary. I know you mentioned how you didn't have time to incorporate the fight scene you planned but I would LOVE to see how that conclusion would've turned out when you are able to put it that out.
(In response to your comment on my comic, I would love to do a collab with you!! I was hoping to work more off of that story point if you're down for it so I'm glad you're on board with it too. We should talk more about it in dms whenever you're down haha)
Again, congratulations! I hope to see more Choko and hopefully some future characters down the road :)
Spartan! Your portrayal of Choko was great! The round 1 aftermath investigation was such a fun idea. Your action is great, I keep being impressed by the sheer variety of camera angles and tilted frames.
page 37 is my favorite, and I really adore how you drew Mani on page 4 its so good haha. 19 just T posing and aura farming on the roof of a skyscraper is really funny to me, I'm curious what his plan with Minjun might have been or was he just gonna eat him.
Great work!
Posted on 19 vs Choko and Min-Juncomic by SpartanArts19
Fuu! I wanted to say earlier, I love a lot how you integrated Choko and Minjun's backstory together! It was really interesting and I would be totally down if you wanted to rematch (or collab??) in the future and maybe build something off of that storyline!
my favorite panels were the family photo (my sweet boy) and Soo with the broom up screaming haha
great stuff!
Posted on Operation: Hot Prowl // Story of the pastcomic by Fuu
You did an excellent job on this, made me laugh, and art was great. You’ve seriously inspired me to experiment more with panel shape and doing less on a “page” and breaking up the panels more. I never really thought about the approach you take so I’m super thankful for this inspiration.
Posted on 19 vs Choko and Min-Juncomic by SpartanArts19
Dang, wow. I really enjoyed how you did two separate stories for the two opponents, I don’t usually see people doing that. And it was a great way to integrate Choko into your story. Great work. Love those boys.
Posted on Operation: Hot Prowl // Story of the pastcomic by Fuu
These are all so good it was extremely hard to vote on a winner, you all did an amazing job on these comics, I would love to read more stories from all of you.
These were such a good read- the quality in the art was damn good. And so are the action scenes!
Love to see the lore of the characters sprinkled in like that. I apologize I couldn't comment on each and every single entry like I usually do, but know I read all of them carefully and I appreciated all of them
Wonderful job guys! You all had a great round, from backgrounds to color and tones, to the great characterization of each others characters! My hat goes off to you all 💕
I want you both to know that when I have the proper words and time to process everything, I am gonna have a lot to say both your comics cause I looooved them so much ahhhh
Okay I forgot to comment last time like some kind of corpulent blob of a slob but, I am impressed with how you pumped out these pages. I hope you can find a goldilocks equilibrium for yourself when making comics on longer and shorter deadlines.
The way you did things was unexpected and in a nice and refreshing way. Sure Choko wasn't part of the first narrative but her horrific tragedy here pinged my curiosity.
Posted on Operation: Hot Prowl // Story of the pastcomic by Fuu
One panel comic pages are pretty novel. I was really scared to read initially because I assumed you decided to bargain your soul away to the devil for hyper crunch tier high quality expedient full comic pages numbering at 56 lmfao. Birds with teeth!
Posted on 19 vs Choko and Min-Juncomic by SpartanArts19
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Incredible work, all three of you! You guys came so close to a three-way tie by how equally good your comics are, lol
Fuu: Great storytelling! While the first half was good (watching 19 just get smacked in the face was funny and him surrounded by all the crows was ominous), the real standout here was the second half. The suspense and silent dread at the aftermath of such a horrific event was built up so well that it genuinely had me holding my breath!
Tgood: I love your utilization of all the characters here! It was incredibly nice to see them all bounce off of each-other in such a natural way. Your use of values makes the greyscale look stellar, too!
Spartan: Once again, great artwork! I honestly really love the way that you capture movement in some panels. Seeing you cameo some of the other characters was very fun, too!
SPARTAN GREAT JOB WITH YOUR COMIC!!! It is an honor to share 2nd place with you, man.
You have such a great sense of camera work/angles and with the 1 panel format you had going, it felt like I was watching a movie as I was reading. Very cinematic. It's a unique take and one I very much vibe with.
Like others said, I loved how you utilized the round 1 aftermaths to have one big climactic battle between the finalists (I lol'd at Guglielmo getting reprimanded for supposedly drinking with a "minor"). Choko's such a badass here and Minjun....well, you got his reckless ass down p good. Confronting someone on his own cause they dared to touch one of his babies AND throwing himself off a building if it means taking them down with him? Not very smart decisions but what's more dumb decisions to his long list of dumb decisions. Using his crows as a safe landing though? Now that's both smart AND badass. Thank you for giving me ideas how to utilize more of his murder squad for future stuff hehe
I am a little curious at the end tho....Was that really Soo at the end there or is the intruder crow up to no good at the end there? Just what is the intruder crow planning on doing now that it's infiltrated the house? What is the song that Soo or whoever was singing cause tbh, I'm not good with recognizing songs based on lyrics ahha
ANYWAY GREAT JOB AGAIN. Your comic was such a fun read and I love all the action and dynamic shots you had going on. Really inspirational ngl. I hope there's more 19 comics in the future! I'd love to do a rematch with him at some point ;)
TGOOD CONGRATS ON WINNING!!! You really earned it ꉂ(ˊᗜˋ*)
I screamed a little bout it on the discord but I ABSOLUTELY LOVED HOW YOU CAPTURED MY BOYS!! From the characterization esp with Soo (I am esp impressed considering how little I've depicted of him so far like you captured his internal cash out and the instinctive cowering behind Minjun so well hehe) to the boy's relationship overall. Their banter and taking turns sharing the one braincell they have between them. I gushed so hard when I saw them do their "fist bump". It really nailed down their bromance relationship that often gets over shadowed by the romance aspect. I was just blown away overall by how on point you got them (≧ᗜ≦)ᡣ𐭩
As for my other thoughts, I also LOVE the set up you have here and how you incorporated every character in your comic. From the boy's introductions to 19's entrance from behind the vault with his usual witty commentary. I know you mentioned how you didn't have time to incorporate the fight scene you planned but I would LOVE to see how that conclusion would've turned out when you are able to put it that out.
(In response to your comment on my comic, I would love to do a collab with you!! I was hoping to work more off of that story point if you're down for it so I'm glad you're on board with it too. We should talk more about it in dms whenever you're down haha)
Again, congratulations! I hope to see more Choko and hopefully some future characters down the road :)
Spartan! Your portrayal of Choko was great! The round 1 aftermath investigation was such a fun idea. Your action is great, I keep being impressed by the sheer variety of camera angles and tilted frames.
page 37 is my favorite, and I really adore how you drew Mani on page 4 its so good haha. 19 just T posing and aura farming on the roof of a skyscraper is really funny to me, I'm curious what his plan with Minjun might have been or was he just gonna eat him.
Great work!
Fuu! I wanted to say earlier, I love a lot how you integrated Choko and Minjun's backstory together! It was really interesting and I would be totally down if you wanted to rematch (or collab??) in the future and maybe build something off of that storyline!
my favorite panels were the family photo (my sweet boy) and Soo with the broom up screaming haha
great stuff!
This is absolutely incredible. The characterization along with their intros towards the final shot.
You did an excellent job on this, made me laugh, and art was great. You’ve seriously inspired me to experiment more with panel shape and doing less on a “page” and breaking up the panels more. I never really thought about the approach you take so I’m super thankful for this inspiration.
Dang, wow. I really enjoyed how you did two separate stories for the two opponents, I don’t usually see people doing that. And it was a great way to integrate Choko into your story. Great work. Love those boys.
These are all so good it was extremely hard to vote on a winner, you all did an amazing job on these comics, I would love to read more stories from all of you.
I think the Mexican standoff was peak ending! Excellent Work! 👌
It's kinda impressive how you managed to connect all your opponent entry endings to your story! Bravo!
Dang, love how your boys story took a dark turn! Good job mate
@Rockman
Just Minjun! The other kid is another character who’ll show up whenever I decide to explore the boys’ past whenever I get to making those comics haha
I really like how you make action, is easy to follow and always looks dynamic. Kinda uncertain about the 1 panel page format tho.
Niiiice, this one got me super hooked! Hyped to see the continuation.
Love the colors and the plot! But I got a little confused, are both kids Minsoo and Minjun?
These were such a good read- the quality in the art was damn good. And so are the action scenes!
Love to see the lore of the characters sprinkled in like that. I apologize I couldn't comment on each and every single entry like I usually do, but know I read all of them carefully and I appreciated all of them
Great work everyone!
Wonderful job guys! You all had a great round, from backgrounds to color and tones, to the great characterization of each others characters! My hat goes off to you all 💕
I want you both to know that when I have the proper words and time to process everything, I am gonna have a lot to say both your comics cause I looooved them so much ahhhh
Wow, this was genuinly impressive submissions from everybody. Hats off! I'm not even sure which one is my fav! They're all good in their own ways haha
Okay I forgot to comment last time like some kind of corpulent blob of a slob but, I am impressed with how you pumped out these pages. I hope you can find a goldilocks equilibrium for yourself when making comics on longer and shorter deadlines.
The way you did things was unexpected and in a nice and refreshing way. Sure Choko wasn't part of the first narrative but her horrific tragedy here pinged my curiosity.
One panel comic pages are pretty novel. I was really scared to read initially because I assumed you decided to bargain your soul away to the devil for hyper crunch tier high quality expedient full comic pages numbering at 56 lmfao. Birds with teeth!
Special thanks to Cab who shared me a ton of cool void city lore and let me cameo Void Keepers in this comic!
LESSSS GOOOOO!!!!!
HYPE!
Let’s 👏 fucking 👏 GO!!!