I was thinking and thinking. Needed to get my thoughts out but ran into articulating all of my ideas, so this reads as extra esoteric but on the other hand I feel that if I explained the confusing parts here the mystique would vanish.
I can kind of see what you meant with struggling to write the ending, because it felt a bit anti-climactic there. Strongest points here were the start with Simon's Doctor Seuss-esque aesthetics and the middle part where you began to gradually add more and more paints and other kinds of papers and art materials. Also the page with the Hebrew is commendable, even if it became a horrible struggle to identify the different niqquds added to each letter, major props for that!
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His crystal eyes looked so beautiful. 19 pages is a lot!
reading it was like going on a journey.
I liked the UFO drawing. I wonder what the full experience would’ve been like
I was thinking and thinking. Needed to get my thoughts out but ran into articulating all of my ideas, so this reads as extra esoteric but on the other hand I feel that if I explained the confusing parts here the mystique would vanish.
I can kind of see what you meant with struggling to write the ending, because it felt a bit anti-climactic there. Strongest points here were the start with Simon's Doctor Seuss-esque aesthetics and the middle part where you began to gradually add more and more paints and other kinds of papers and art materials. Also the page with the Hebrew is commendable, even if it became a horrible struggle to identify the different niqquds added to each letter, major props for that!
oh yeah and guache of unknown origin
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song: spirits- and the devil makes 3