Great work both of you! I love how different these characters are and how well they work together. Both super entertaining stories, I really enjoyed them!
Pizza Man, love the arm hair part! It perfectly juxtaposes the characters' different personalities, and the placement of that section was really smart. Instead of hearing a backstory from Gwen, we see their antics play out in the car and it characterizes them beautifully. Stellar case of show don't tell. I adore the expressions throughout, especially on Kurdis. The big, exaggerated body language is glorious here. That next to Burmeister's chill vibe really works. The way these two characters think couldn't be more different, and you showed this exceptionally.
Snager, the disappearing joint is my favorite. The body language is extremely charming and very confident from Burmeister. He's in a situation where he's got no power, is caught red-handed, yet manages to control the situation through jokes and flirting. Like what a badass little lawbreaker. Meanwhile Kurdis, who has all the power and authority in this situation, caves to Burmeister's charm. I really like that Kurdis recognizes the flirting all at once in one panel. "You want to hold this, my arm's getting tired" is perfect.
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These were some interesting watercolors! They nice to look at!
This was impressive for 3 days! Good job! The info boxes with each characters’ relationship to the weed was hilarious.
The interactions were interesting and you're nuts for making such a long comic in 3 days time haha!
Great work both of you! I love how different these characters are and how well they work together. Both super entertaining stories, I really enjoyed them!
Pizza Man, love the arm hair part! It perfectly juxtaposes the characters' different personalities, and the placement of that section was really smart. Instead of hearing a backstory from Gwen, we see their antics play out in the car and it characterizes them beautifully. Stellar case of show don't tell. I adore the expressions throughout, especially on Kurdis. The big, exaggerated body language is glorious here. That next to Burmeister's chill vibe really works. The way these two characters think couldn't be more different, and you showed this exceptionally.
Snager, the disappearing joint is my favorite. The body language is extremely charming and very confident from Burmeister. He's in a situation where he's got no power, is caught red-handed, yet manages to control the situation through jokes and flirting. Like what a badass little lawbreaker. Meanwhile Kurdis, who has all the power and authority in this situation, caves to Burmeister's charm. I really like that Kurdis recognizes the flirting all at once in one panel. "You want to hold this, my arm's getting tired" is perfect.
Kinda cracked how you both pushed the limit here tbh.