Raltz: A cool little fight! The part where Crikey just sneaks behind Sirloin like it's a horror movie made me chortle, lol.
Goldie: Super cute and silly! "Tiny child both willing and capable to throw hands" is such a fun trope, and I love the way that you played around with it here :]
These were both so fun! I think this is a really fun matchup because both characters are stronger than they seem at first, and I love the ways you showed how your characters underestimated each other. Both comics made me smile a lot and were charming and funny. I was a little confused about the last few pages of Sirloin's comic at first, but I think I get what's happening on a second read through (looks like Crikey's second form was involved 👀). I also enjoyed the subtle silhouette cameos in Crikey's comic (you couldn't help but include your OTP could you 😋). It's always fun to see the Valkyries, and I love how the connection between Sirloin and Swan made a great story hook for both comics! Well done both of you and I'm excited to see what comes next!
This was really cute! The hair highlights was an interesting idea, but I think they were a bit too bright? I admittedly got distracted at first and didn't realize they were supposed to be highlights, I thought it was just a lightning bolt pattern on the hair. Making them a paler yellow might help in the future? Overall though good job! I still love the video game references in this, lol
Posted on Void Olympics : Round 2 - Second Impactcomic by Raltz
The tiddy kick was the funniest thing XDD your backgrounds are so gorgeous too, and your grayscale is so on point. I loved Crikey's reactions to this whole thing, this was a really good showcase of her personality!
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Both of you came out with such fun comics!
Raltz: A cool little fight! The part where Crikey just sneaks behind Sirloin like it's a horror movie made me chortle, lol.
Goldie: Super cute and silly! "Tiny child both willing and capable to throw hands" is such a fun trope, and I love the way that you played around with it here :]
Surprised to see a Sirloin Smack-Down showing from both sides!
These were both so fun! I think this is a really fun matchup because both characters are stronger than they seem at first, and I love the ways you showed how your characters underestimated each other. Both comics made me smile a lot and were charming and funny. I was a little confused about the last few pages of Sirloin's comic at first, but I think I get what's happening on a second read through (looks like Crikey's second form was involved 👀). I also enjoyed the subtle silhouette cameos in Crikey's comic (you couldn't help but include your OTP could you 😋). It's always fun to see the Valkyries, and I love how the connection between Sirloin and Swan made a great story hook for both comics! Well done both of you and I'm excited to see what comes next!
Cheese is indeed the ultimate peace offering lol
This was really cute! The hair highlights was an interesting idea, but I think they were a bit too bright? I admittedly got distracted at first and didn't realize they were supposed to be highlights, I thought it was just a lightning bolt pattern on the hair. Making them a paler yellow might help in the future? Overall though good job! I still love the video game references in this, lol
The tiddy kick was the funniest thing XDD your backgrounds are so gorgeous too, and your grayscale is so on point. I loved Crikey's reactions to this whole thing, this was a really good showcase of her personality!
"All is forgiven with cheese" is so cute and perfect 😂😂😂
The Kablam! panel is one of my favorites I've seen in a while
Your character art is so good! The detail on Sirloin's hair is really nicely done
All your lineart is great in this and your backgrounds + action + some little details in the inks are outstanding to me.
Your best one yet.