Petrichor: This came out absolutely incredible! Muro is such a little cutie - I audibly awwed when he tried to smile, lol. He's very quickly becoming one of my favorite characters in Void :]
Radji: Love how you've characterized their dynamic here! Her talking about her connection to Void to somebody deeply unused to it was very interesting to read.
These two comics were super fun to read. I would've like to seen Radji's in a more completed state BUT It is readable and it is a great story overall. While Petrichor's on the other hand was a very nice interaction between the two and I really dig Muro's smile. Can't wait to see more of these two in the future!
It's a shame you couldn't finish this comic! From the sketches, I can see a lot of great composition and camera work. I couldn't quite make out all of the dialogue, but I think I got the jist and it's a very cute comic 🩷 I love that ending! I think it takes that kind of person to make a life in Void City/Voidlands 😂
Posted on Smiley the Slime Goo Thingy featurecomic by Radji
I WOULD DIE TO PROTECT MURO'S SMILE 🥹 What a good creature! I love how Muro sees the similarities between them even though they look so different. I also love the recurring joke of everyone wondering where Muro used to work 😂 Hopefully there are many more breaks for Muro in the days ahead!!!
There's no doubts about the quality of this comic, and this is such a fun little pairing it's just such a cute little read overall. Despite all the viscera.
Despite the unfinished visuals, I still think everything read pretty well. At least I didn't have any issues with it. What I really like about this comic, writing wise, is the exploration of what it means to be a citizen of the void after the events of 2022. It's definitely a topic I've been wanting to explore and that I definitely hope to see more of in the future as the voidlands setting gets further fleshed out
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Absolutely fantastic work Petri! I love everything about this comic, it’s so solid! And i absolutely adore Muro and his smiles, I can’t wait to read more of his adventures! 💕
And while the dialogue is still there and most of the actions and body languages are clear, I end up getting a little lost every now and then. I hope you get to finish this soon 'cause it looks super fun!
The dynamic between these two is really neat and I enjoy how they are getting along
Smiley's love for Void is very sweet and wholesome
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Petrichor: This came out absolutely incredible! Muro is such a little cutie - I audibly awwed when he tried to smile, lol. He's very quickly becoming one of my favorite characters in Void :]
Radji: Love how you've characterized their dynamic here! Her talking about her connection to Void to somebody deeply unused to it was very interesting to read.
I love how these two feel comics feel like they're connected! Radji must have some special superpower that lets him read his opponent like a book XD
I like how even though it’s sketches it is very expressive and dynamic. I imagine in color it would be amazing!
I enjoyed this comic a lot! Your lineart is so clean and the characters are fun!
and thank you very much for the cameo! It was funny :)
These two comics were super fun to read. I would've like to seen Radji's in a more completed state BUT It is readable and it is a great story overall. While Petrichor's on the other hand was a very nice interaction between the two and I really dig Muro's smile. Can't wait to see more of these two in the future!
It's a shame you couldn't finish this comic! From the sketches, I can see a lot of great composition and camera work. I couldn't quite make out all of the dialogue, but I think I got the jist and it's a very cute comic 🩷 I love that ending! I think it takes that kind of person to make a life in Void City/Voidlands 😂
I WOULD DIE TO PROTECT MURO'S SMILE 🥹 What a good creature! I love how Muro sees the similarities between them even though they look so different. I also love the recurring joke of everyone wondering where Muro used to work 😂 Hopefully there are many more breaks for Muro in the days ahead!!!
Man, having a calmer perspective from these two is quite nice, I hope Muro comes to appreciate these new concepts XD
AH!! EGG DEALER CAMEO!!!
This was such a cute comic! I loved the dynamic between Smiley and Muro (please give Muro a break....)
Awesome art Radji! Would love to see this one finished!
Loved the interactions between Smiley and Muro! I really enjoy your writing Petri! Always a pleasure to see your comics.
There's no doubts about the quality of this comic, and this is such a fun little pairing it's just such a cute little read overall. Despite all the viscera.
Despite the unfinished visuals, I still think everything read pretty well. At least I didn't have any issues with it. What I really like about this comic, writing wise, is the exploration of what it means to be a citizen of the void after the events of 2022. It's definitely a topic I've been wanting to explore and that I definitely hope to see more of in the future as the voidlands setting gets further fleshed out
Sorry you couldn’t finish, but what you do have looks good, though I couldn’t read a small handful of words
Absolutely fantastic work Petri! I love everything about this comic, it’s so solid! And i absolutely adore Muro and his smiles, I can’t wait to read more of his adventures! 💕
Most of my recent battles feel like follow ups of my opponent's side nowadays, it's funny it still keep happening XD
Ah, too bad you couldn’t finish the comic in time…
I really hope you do finish it, the scenes look so good! And I loved their dynamic here too.
Honestly, it kinda feels like your comic could be a follow-up to mine, like they already know each other and team up now and then.
Can’t wait to see the finished version!
I loved the lettering in the first panel!
And while the dialogue is still there and most of the actions and body languages are clear, I end up getting a little lost every now and then. I hope you get to finish this soon 'cause it looks super fun!
The dynamic between these two is really neat and I enjoy how they are getting along
Smiley's love for Void is very sweet and wholesome
This was so nice and cute to read!
Great insight on how Muro and Smiley are alike and how well they balance each other!
Muro's little smile is absolutely adorable! Really liked how clean and crisp the colors looked
I am also so in love with Master Goblin's design, she is so whimsical and adorable
This was sweet and you're really hitting those bullseye's in making Muro very endearing.
I hope you can get the inking on this done because I'd love to see what you had in mind!
I'm honestly thinking this was the superior comic here, the non-completeness of mine notwithstanding XD
It's funny we both had the same idea of Muro and Smiley finding similarities in each other.
Nice and short, with good dynamics between the two and better interaction
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