Void Olympics : Round 1

I liked how this felt like the plot to a short for a cartoon you really captured what I feel like these three would be like if they had their own comic book. Oddly enough your own character kind of felt like a side character because of it. I hope you let A Dog shine more if you make it on to round 2!

Ayy nice to see a N0. 66 cameo! I'll admit I laughed a little too hard at page 6. Pretty solid comic. I liked seeing the animals talk to each other and the interactions between Cat and Dog were entertaining. Its too bad you weren't able to color the backgrounds on time but it didn't take away too much from the comic for me.

I LOVED THIS! I love how much every character's personality shines through and the ways they play off of each other. "Did we win?" Lmaoooo 🩷

This was really cute! Extremely wholesome. I think the comic relied a little too much on dialogue to communicate the story, and if you want to practice storytelling via visuals rather than words, I recommend making some silent comics in the future. It's hard to communicate everything without dialogue so use your best judgement on when to practice that (probably not in a battle but then again that's how I practice everything lol). But again, this was a really cute and wholesome comic and I'd love to see more!

I got to say i enjoy the dynamic you gave my boys. Mustard cheating is also pretty good. The announcer having a hard time with Mustard and Musterd's got me

I love this so much XDD The Cat bribing his way into the Olympics is fantastic, and I loved the contrast between this semi-grumpy cat genuinely trying to win and a dog being a (seemingly?) clueless ball of sunshine just here to have fun. The sub-plot of Mustard and Lunchbox watching the Cat was also super funny!! tho I will say I spent way too long trying to figure out if there was a hidden message behind the bolded letters in the robot's speech bubbles, lol. I also love the fact that you had a dog carry the Olympic torch, lmaoooo. I was considering doing the same thing for mine but ended up cutting that bit out, so it makes me super happy that it showed up in your side! :D honestly I couldn't stop smiling throughout the whole thing, it was just a joy to see a dog doing Olympic Shenanigans hehe. also 👀 Mustard's first name has been revealed! and what a fantastic name lmaooooo

That foolish dog!

The uncoloured pages almost feel like a deliberate choice even though I assume it was due to time constraints.