Dekkard- I like the limited color and the dark alley/city corner setting. The glow effect seems out of place in the city shot but it looks cool on dekkard's armor later. I like the angle in the close-up over the shoulder shots of Sanguine and the close up panel on the first page of the gun getting cocked is cool!
Bobert- The multi-headed dragon is really cool, and I like the set-up with the shady guy breaking the piggy bank and then pulling out his own gold tooth.. that's a cool sequence
Thank you for the encouragement Plat and Cab. Though Cab, I'll clarify that Sanguine is not a she, he's just a very feminine guy, as a foil to Quicksilver's more heroic and masculine (by a narrow degree lol) aspects.
I'm sorry you weren't able to finish your comic, lord knows I had a few myself I still need to finish sometimes things happen but don't let that stop you, you are a beast at making comics here and the community knows it, keep on making more comics, we all await your next tale.
An interesting tale, if anything I recommend perhaps practicing your human body proportions, as i can you have a scope on how to render your own character but when you had to draw you opponent's, her appearance was off at times, practice makes perfect, and the best way to do that is by making more comics, its a climb but its a great view ;-)
Dekkard - I just want to say Great Use of Tones! The Greys and the spot blacks were on point and I thoroughly Enjoyed how they came out. I wanted to highlight the last panel on the first page as your use of spot blacks are very ambitious, Be sure to spread around the dark shading while using this technique to get the most mileage out of it Also another nice touch with the police Sirens being the only colored part of the comic, very Noir. I like it. You did Great!
Bobert - You did what you could and still turned something in which is something I can totally respect. We understand that life takes priority and we hope to see more battles from you in the near future. Also seeing Sanguine being their usual chaotic self is always fun to see. I do see the potential that you were going with in this comic and I commend your efforts.
I can't wait to see what is next for both characters!
I will reiterate that I'll be working on a more polished comic as long as I have the momentum going. Anyways GG Dek, thanks for fighting me lol. I'll give your comic a read asap.
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