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Remind me to go shopping later

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Remind me to go shopping later
By Raltz
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King
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Final Score: 5.19
Casual Employee!? 18 Hour Per Week!?
By Bobert
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Sanguine
Final Score: 4.81

Comments (6)

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Red
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6d ago
I laughed out loud on both of these, especially page 2 of Bobert’s side. Please make more short and silly comics!

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Pizza Man
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6d ago
Raltz - This one was more clean (or maybe it's less blurry?) than your usual lines and the jokes made sense to me, having a pretty clear set up and payoff. I like your decision to use screen tones, it's something I wouldn't mind seeing you incorporate in your future comics. It was a little hard telling Sanguine and King apart on my first read through make sure you establish features of the characters clearly to avoid this. Upon another read I noticed that it looks like you did try to incorporate Sanguine's face dots but since the comic isn't in color they come off as eyebrows or regular face lines. In this case I think it would've been fine to use Bobert's method of adding color just for the dots if you don't have time to color the whole comic which in a 24 hour comic, is a safe bet. Bobert - I wrote out a big ol crit but then I noticed the preference tag oops XD I'll always appreciate your dedication to drawing oc's in maid outfits and I liked the ambitious pose on the first page as well.

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Batty
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9d ago
You do a really good job with ruffles!! Those maid outfits look v nice hehe. And this was a nice, concise story to tell within the time limit :3 sometimes the hardest part of short deadlines is knowing how to limit yourself and not try to do more than what's possible within the timeframe-- which I think you've done very well here!
Posted on Casual Employee!? 18 Hour Per Week!? comic by Bobert

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Batty
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9d ago
Your chibis are really cute! However, I feel like sometimes they can look a little same-face-y; there were times I had a hard time telling who was who ^^; that said, this was a cute lil 24 hour comic, and I liked the touch of using the paper texture! Also 'big ol yaoi hands' gave me a laugh XD
Posted on King feature comic by Raltz

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Snowy
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10d ago
This was a fun and entertaining little comic, nice job!
Posted on Casual Employee!? 18 Hour Per Week!? comic by Bobert

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Bobert
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13d ago
Insane that we made the same plot but differently.
Posted on King feature comic by Raltz