Ohmageddon: Path of Conquest

Yo. This comic was off the rails. I like how you all pooled your strengths into this one. I hope you had fun with it. There's like 5 of you and one of me so I can't really spare any fully articulated critiques beyond some encouragement.

Sel, I like how you had Om speaking in verbose purple prose at the beginning. I think it compliments her and I think you should aim for it as much as possible, cause it felt to me like you had her speak informally more often as the comic went on. I dunno what to say about the visual art besides keep sharpening your strengths lol. I give it 777 Sumerian poems out of 8 wrathful carrion demons.

Just wanted to say that this was a super fun read!! Really glad everyone came together to make this. Enjoyed both sides!!

I already told you (Selevan) what I thought in our group server, but I thought I'd put it on here as well! I'm re-reading it now (for the third 3...I think?) and I just keep noticing little things that you did so well! You really did the homework on making sure the characters were represented well. Like on Page 6, how each panel is a different character, but also, each of the texts directly relates to the character of that panel. I still chuckle at the fact that we had the same idea With EVA surprised that Ohm could see her and how we both thought about Brett and Theakon cooperating. I also love how insanely muscly Theakon is to a comedic level lol. You also did great at making sure that each character had their moments in the spotlight that really took advantage of their own special particularities. Making sure that this story is something that could only happen with these particular characters and isn't just a cookie cutter fight where you could implant any character and it would basically be the same fight. This comic gave us a real good look at who Ohm is as a character. I admit that while writing it, I had a different vision of her character which is why my version seems so different. But I think whomever fights her next will definitely have a better idea and should be able to rock her even more. There's also something about the art that I can't really pinpoint. While it's not the best technically speaking (if I were to compare it to professional work that is), it's definitely got it's charm and I could still definitely see this in a store somewhere. A similar type of charm to the Bryan Lee O'Malley (Scott Pilgrim creator) art style. All in all, this whole read keeps giving me old school anime vibes every time I read it. Really great job! Definitely want a rematch against Theakon in the future mano-a-djinno.

First off both sides did an amazing job, great work both of you. I was able to see some of your work behind the scenes and I will say y'all work good together, and major Kudos to Selevan for taking on multiple foes at once. Ohm side - Your comic had great dynamic angles and great fight choreography easy to read and follow, so impress by the effort you had to show for it, great job. Defenders side- You all did an amazing job, it was a fun, simple plot involving basketball that you all managed to showcase in all your characters unique ways, funny and entertaining it might be a large comic but it flows so nicely, I felt like I just started reading it when it came to an end, mark of a great tale it leave you wanting more. I hope to see a sequel of some sorts down the line, especially cuz you left us a good cliff hanger with Eva (will she release Ohm ???) , Thank you for sharing this fun collab and I can't wait to see what happens next.

This has been a fun read, and best of all I could tell that everybody was able to collaborate fairly seamlessly with each other to tell a cohesive story, which is a feat in itself. The Space Jam angle was great, and I love how you were able to let each of your characters shine in their own way. It's a great twist to the classic 5 vs 1 fistfight and I could tell you guys had fun with it! Good job to all involved!

This was a fun read, and kudos to you for taking on the role of the big bad! It's a pretty basic 5 against 1 battle of old and I think you did a good job with all of your work! Keep experimenting with all of those angles!

AND WELCOME TO THE JAM

COME ON AND SLAM