JCee - what a cute interaction between the two, seeing this nice side of Swan gives a comfy feeling, also CHEESEE!
Raltz - lovely comic, I like a lot the animation at the end.
Jay - stellar comic all in one week! Wow! I am blown away by the quality of your inks. Sirloin looks incredibly adorable in your style and their interaction is so heartwarming! Swan's volatile temper is matched by her sweet and caring side and I love that about her. Funny enough, it's Sirloin who has a bit of a temper in this comic. Maybe Swan saw a glimpse of herself in Sirloin and that's why they were able to bond a little bit. I am def looking forward to future comics featuring these two!
Raltz - I love how you leaned into Swan's passion for cooking. There's room for improvement with the art as it looks unfinished but you were able to convey the story effectively. Keep practicing and focusing on the foundations. Maybe try to do comics with longer deadlines so you can focus on polishing your work more. The expressions are so cute and thank you for including Raven in the end! I had fun imagining the chaotic possibilities of Sirloin and Raven's interaction.
Raltz- I love your sense of humour and how creative/ unique your approach to comic making is, however, I do think the art needs refining. I love your style, especially how you draw Sirlion's expressions, but currently, it appears somewhat rushed, it'll be good to see your lines get more confident/ tidy and the overall look be more intentional.
Jcee- I love your attention to detail with backgrounds and props. The cheese platter Swan was carrying around looked very appealing. I love how much of a foodie she is it's a charming part of her character. Sirlion was very cute here and suitably mischievous. V cute read
Both stories were very sweet and cute in their own way! The way Swan talked to Sirloin was absolutely adorable- it's always so sweet to see her motherly side showing with children! And Raltz the way you tackled your side was so creative and cute! Excellent work, both of you!
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