Awe, man! They killed Matholomew. He was my favorite character. Good job, both of you.
STEALREHN - I liked how to tackled the theme of the comic, but I would have liked a little more contrast in the characters and background. I think an easy way of doing that would be to keep them color coordinated but filled them in a lighter version of their color. You wouldn't need to shade or anything more, but it would help show off the details you already put into each panel.
BATTY - I liked your story here. Nice and simple. If the texture was intensional then ignore this: if you knock up the contrast more after scanning your pages I think it will bring clarity of your work will and show off the cool character designs you and expressions you are able to display in the comics. I really enjoy that part of your art.
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