Raltz:
Cute comic. It's nice to see you experimenting with stuff!
(If you ever want to commit to pixel art further down the line, remember that getting good at regular visual art ((whether traditional or digital)) fundamentals and skills will feed into your understanding of pixels and sprites in a downstream manner but if you wanted to do both back to back the process of improvement may be a wee bit slower.
This is all hypothetically speaking of course. I don't know what you personally would like to do at the moment)
The art shift was cute and the only real outstanding flaw I can identify is that the pictures were a bit too big and unwieldy. Keep that in mind for future stuff.
Also damn, didn't expect a Sanguine cameo at all. Thank you for that haha!
Swanpy:
Your comic was neato and cute too. I see now that Katya does have a pretty broad soft side in spite of her amoral ways. I like your depiction of Sirloins eyes.
These two were quite fun to read and I really liked how the two were distinct in their own style but fun to read through
Raltz - I like Comics that subvert expectation when it comes to it's premise and it was a funny joke at the end. But I do recommend shrinking down the size of your pages a bit to let them be more readable (at least on PC) Mobile may be different. But at the end it was a fun read and nostalgic look on Classic RPGs. Well done here
Swanpyart - The Paneling is clean along with the colors. I like this one being simple meet and do something silly and fun. Those comics are fun to do and I am glad that you took a simple route for it. You did good with this short story and you should be happy with this.
Great job to the both of you and I hope to see more of these two characters in future comics
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