Draw - I always enjoy your traditional approach to your pages. I especially enjoyed how ypu depicted Boots being "mind controlled" and how your opponent was integrated into your current story. The tightness of planes and lack of backgrounds felt like finishing the story became more priority than finishing the panels which I know can happen with these deadlines.
Pizza - This was very cute and I enjoyed the dialogue between everyone involved. It was less serious, but still fun. The panels did feel over-simplistic and almost rushed as if to rely on the viewer to deduct what's taking place. Again, signs of rushed panels for sake of completing the story which is a common obstacle. I also assumed that was Dred until he said his name because he looked more like a samurai than your opponent (I think it was the facial hair choice).
Thanks for an abundane of pages from the both of you.
Thx Animeshen! It’s hard to believe that Dreds is nearly 20 years old in Void. He came up with those old school characters and I miss those artists amazing work and stories a lot. On the flip side, one of the things I like most about entervoid is the new school artists, amazing off the wall characters, and cool comic styles. I am also an old fogey.
well first of all, Drawdan, great to see you back~! Always love when Drednaught reappears!!
Dan; wonderful inks, you got a really classic style thats super appealing, solid spotblacks and you really rock that thick inking style. Very cool villain and you draw the raddest robots. I like seeing HR99 in your style, hes so cute!! As an old fogey i also appreciated the callbacks to some of the older characters that aren't active anymore, good to keep the memory alive.
Pizza: A bit messy looking, likes get kinda scratchy but theres a nice simplicity to it, I think with your art style being so comedic you should try to focus on steadying your inks a little. Writing as always is top notch, the idea of rats mind controlled by Deus' still active robots is hilarious, a surprising major threat! I love the gag that they keep giving these villainous monologues but no one speaks rat lol. One thing I'm a tad confused by is at the end HR99's energy levels were low so his robot body fired off one last end-all ray beam in a violent burst. I feel like after that, he should be at like... 1% battery, if that lol. So whatever he did at the end that healed Drednaught, was that a RESULT of his energy being depleted? Some backup battery he wasn't aware of? Looking forward to more from you~
Very interesting match up!
Funny how the page counts match up.
Drawdan- Very nice spot blacks! Good twist at the end.
Pizza- Always a fan of the humor, also very nice color choice
Drawdan - Love the stylized inks! I think you could have had more backgrounds in the cityscape, but I really enjoy the story you've made here!
Pizza man - I like the muted colors and the humor! The lines look a little unsure in some areas, but I still enjoyed your comic.
Lovely work, both of you, I'd love to see more!
I liked it Pizza, your comic reminded me of a Saturday morning cartoon- but with cursing- I think your story is great and the color pallet is also cool. I’ve never drawn a comic in the Void wastelands and now I want to. Your characters show some great expression which is one thing I still struggle with. You can work on your perspective and anatomy, but your loose cartoon style and caricature postures lets my discount any cries on anatomy really. Thx for the invite to spare, I had a lot of fun drawing your characters.
drawdan:
Thx for the Challenge Pizza. Looking forward to the battle. I guess I can use any of your 99 bots in my comic?
Yep any one of the 99 robots are fair game! Use as many as you like or just one works too
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