Character previewCharacter preview
arrow_back

HR99 vs Oblivia

4 Weeks + 1 Week
Regular Match

Comics

HR99 vs Oblivia
By marrionberrypi
chat_bubble 5
star star
Oblivia
Final Score: 6.15
HR99 vs Oblivia
By Pizza Man
chat_bubble 5
star star
HR99
trophy WINNER
Final Score: 6.26

Comments (5)

Fluffsamasprime's avatar
Fluffsamasprime
All-Rounder
1 year ago
These were both fun reads! I enjoyed the humor in both. The awkwardness of the 69 joke in Marrion's and the hunt for the prized plushie in Pizza's

Badger's avatar
Badger
All-Rounder
1 year ago
Marrionberrypi- alright, this one got a legit laugh out of me lol. The awkward and long pauses, and 69's complete confusion, work really well here! for crit-- I recommend ensuring that your lighting setup is really good when you take pictures; the actual resolution quality of these is good, but I think if you put up some extra lights you could reduce the shadows you're getting on the page. (Ideally, an ambient light, such as indirect sunlight, works really well for art pics). Good comic! Pizza man- Really enjoying the lighthearted tone here, the jokes were also pretty creative and got me a few times too! 24 cheating to get the plushies is a fun twist. I'd recommend giving the backgrounds a bit more room, especially on scene transitions; the camera feels like it's often very close to the characters. If you mix in some more wide shots, it'll add some extra spice to your paneling and reinforce where the characters are standing more. It looks like you're using color to establish location (purple for the interior, cyan for outside) and I think that's a good touch which does help address this concern. Good stuff, I always enjoy your humor!

Pizza Man's avatar
Pizza Man
All-Rounder
1 year ago
OOOOOOO Berry I love how you draw 69...the robot! I love his interaction with Oblivia too it was an all around pleasant comic to read. Ty for the fight!

DesDemonical's avatar
DesDemonical
All-Rounder
1 year ago
marrionberrypi- HA! that central joke and their ensuing convo was so awkward, i loved that 69 didn't actually know what joke they were making pizza man- i loved their central plushy conflict. The no robots sign made me laugh

Bobert's avatar
Bobert
All-Rounder
1 year ago
Well done for completing the comics. My only critique isn't even really a critique and more just saying that you gotta clock in more time in drawing (we all do obviously), because otherwise these comics are not bad. You both set out to tell the short and humorous stories you wanted to tell and you nailed that. Keep drawing you guys!