Pizza, there's not much to say that hasn't been said already. This was a very enjoyable comic for sure so I'll cut to the one bit of crit that I have. The bottom of page three, where you have to use arrows to indicate the read order. Clearly you recognize that readability is an issue, hence the arrows, but I do wish you'd actually just made the panel layout more intuitive. I've chalked it up to a time constraint issue, but really just wanted to get that out there, especially since there was a whole discussion about panel layouts on the discord just the other day. Otherwise, very good work
Phosphene : Too bad you couldn't finish in time, but don't fret over it, you'll do better next time. I'll wait for when you post your comic later.
Pizza man: Hilarious and Lonney Tuney, me gusta!
Looking forward to reading your pages when you upload them individually Phosphene!
As for Pizza Man, I really loved your writing! It was both hilarious and intriguing. I'm interested to see what happens to Bo next!
Failed to upload pages in time, will upload it individually still!
As for Bo Lee Alley, this comics is really funny. Good luck with your next opponents =)
My condolences to you too Phos. I wish you better fortune in the future.
AS FOR YOU PIZZA:
This was a fun and zany romp. I hope to see more insanity in the future.
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