it's so nice to see the invitational artists being so active and playing with each other, as god intended! It's giving everyone good ideas for battles to have with y'all! good job you two, and good luck!
Selevan: your coloring is bold and the atmosphere you built with it reads really well. I really feel like im bushwhacking in the hot jungle, then I really feel like im in a boring apartment. However, I'm not sure what the relation is between the two. was she reading the back of her cereal box and got way too into it? no, Mythra had something to do with it? why? what happened? was she in another dimension did Mythra killed her there? to bring her here? WHY Tho. maybe I'm supposed to ask WHY to that, but it was still hard to tell HOW. Anyway, the mysteries deepen and I like that.
Phosphene: your 3 pages are so much differnter to Selevan. they are quick and punchy and tell a simple simple cut and dry story and it all works very well and got a chuckle out of me. this was a great approach to what is essentially a speed match. this also makes it canon that Mythra has 4th wall breaking powers, or, metaphorically so. what she really has is the ability to break the rules of the universe. very interesting illustration of this ability!
Both comics were really interesting, nice work!
I'll admit both made me a little confused on what was going on, but I like the layouts that were used, and the artwork looked nice. I hope to see more comics in the future!
Glad to see more comics from both of you!
Mytra still apprenticing for Saal it seems and Amelia just threatening smol mouse with gun!
Really dug that page 2 on phosphenes!
Seeing lots of improvements on Selevans! Nice page sizes and clear backgrounds!
I'm glad you could finally upload them. These are fun. I'm split on wanting them to be longer and also thinking that they are the perfect length and have good story economy.
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Still thin that this is one of the funnier comics I've been part of, and am very happy I lost, mainly because of the implications XD