The storytelling on both was really good!
STEAL- Your use of dark shadows and light was delicious
FLUFFS- The way you managed to explain so much in so few pages is amazing, and so are the colors!
Rehn: I wanna see more stuff with Lathos from you. Your comic was nice and I wish it was longer.
Fluff: This one was so short and yet it didn't make me want more pages but in a good way. It's intriguing and makes you interested in more stuff down the line but also makes you feel satisfied with what you have. I like that.
Both of these comics were so nice!
Rehn - I love the expressions in yours Rehn, they convey so much. The angles were ambitious, though I do agree with Shen that the ending seemed a little abrupt, I really would like to see more of these two interacting!
Fluff- The colors in yours were so well done and made the comic so moody! I love the insinuated story and background elements; it makes me want to know what happens next!
These were everything I wanted them to be!
REHN: The looks of DISGUST and CONTEMPT on Lathos' face are DIVINE, this is excellent storytelling through expression! Bones is delightfully over-the-top as well, these guys are such different breeds of 'scumbag' its great to see them interact. I love your pacing and dialogue and use of textures, though if I did have a crit I'd say the ending seems a bit abrupt. Also laughing, "find yourself another errand boy!" The very next comic, Ghost is with Bones, unconscious XD HE TOOK IT TO HEART
FLUFF: THE COLOURS, DUKE, THE COLOURS! I am LOVING the experiments youve been doing with this in the last one for atmospheric lighting, its really paying off and gorgeous to look at. That first page really sets the scene that we're in for some goddam debauchery lol... though i might suggest some textured brushes or overlays to the street and buildings to make them look a little more lived-in. The ending was so mysterious, whats that monster with the glowing teeth? Whose eye is that? I want to know more! Thanks for including Ghost... i THINK.... maybe Ill draw him later wondering why his back hurts and he cant remember most of yesterday =P
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