Awesome job on both sides!
Phosphene: Really like the gradual build up of color on page 2 as Amelia grows more violent with the whack a mole game. The black and red on the final page is really nice. The panel break in page 7 has a really iwould have liked to see more of that for the action started on page 8 or when Amelia was getting flung on page 9 into the barrier. It would have give the velocity which she was being thrown a bit more oomph.
Artsandgoodies: You've been putting in a lot of work on the colors and special effects which all come out really well. There are some spots through out the comic where it feels like the body proportions suffer. You've got some really good poses and some nice action shots. The stuff done with Bthee's shadow is also a really nice show of her abilities
Artsan: You should do more B Thee stuff in general. She's interesting.
"You see me as a mere dog when instead I am merely a cat"
Phosphene: This was cool. Was page 16 meant to be the final one? It feels a bit anti-climactic if that's the case but if it is not then I can understand, especially since you give us so much like flashbacks and allusions to Amelia's past, lots of action and creative execution of B Thee's powers and the nice paneling. But there is one major complaint that keeps this from being the perfect comic.
A carnival and no clowns in sight? 0/10.
Edit: It has come to my attention that there are clowns in the comic. I rescind everything. 1000000/10
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