NRG: Eva doesnt know how right she is to turn him away lmaooooo. [deleted the rest coz i only JUST saw you requested no crit.]
Fluff: "I consider myself good" I do not believe this man XD The end is so ominous, I want more revealed. I also like how you made Eva in colour but the rest in monochrome, i feel like with ghost characters we usually see the opposite.
Energy: It'd be cool for you to reveal more about Eve's parents regardless of the outcome of this comic fight. I wanna know more.
Fluff: It's groovy how you managed to get so much done with only 2 pages. I need to work towards this level of story economy compartmentalisation.
Energy - Good Effort my dude hopefully you can get more time the next go around so you can fill out more of the comic
Fluff - This is one awesome short story, its quick and straight to the punchline. Hopefully we see more of Bones in the near future
energy, this is some of the most complete work i've ever seen from you. keep going, if it gives you pleasure, my son.
I love that we're getting more Bone lore, here. he's so interesting. he considers himself to be a good guy? fascinating. news to me. we even get to see his partner? was that the one he talked about on his date with old lady Gwen? im sure the story got cut off here unnaturally do to time constraints, but I'm still on the edge of my seat about it.
Energy: I know you had issues being able to get time to work on the comic, maybe try going for one or two pages when you have such a short deadline? I did like the story you had going for this though, and I'm glad you were able to upload your comic.
Fluff: I love the little bit of lore we got about Bones and his partner from this, and the expressions are so fun to look at! I'm really enjoying learning more about his backstory slowly through comics!
Energy: Good effort, im not too familiar with the characters so the story was hard for me to understand. I think thats important because each comic should in itself be a complete story.
Fluff: I liked how you were able to execute a clever and complete story in only two pages! Very impressive in my opinion
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