These were pretty tight reads!
Phosphene Comics:
This was a funny short story you had going on here. sometimes a solid punchline is all you need for a great story. I also liked the colors as well. Hopefully we see more of Amelia in the near future!
Desdemonical:
Solid battle along with a funny epilogue. Man this one was a fun read. Your Linework is pretty good and I like the pacing of it. Great job and can't wait to see Sorridega Sever-Corners in the near future!
Great job both of you for these one weekers also both of these were very funny and entertaining
Phosphene- I love how you do so much expressions with sublte mouth movements and body language.
Des- I love the panel composition varity in this as well as the different camera angles you use in the individual panels
Great work! These were both really solid for 1-weekers. Welcome to Void!
Phosphene- A fun lil gag comic. Very entertaining!
Des- This was bursting with funny moments and characterful art. I really enjoyed it!
PHOSPHENE: An excellent short-form comic that works really well! Always nice to see a short, simple joke done well - with excellent colouring to boot!
DES: It’s surprising quite how dynamic you can be in a rectangle panel, and I feel having hands and noses point out of their panels works to make that effect work remarkably well. And of course, the epilogue joke is a brilliant gag.
It’s funny how both of these comics have a similar thing with the ice cream. But you both go about it different and both of these comics are very funny an entertaining.
One weeks are hard great job to both of you.
Phos: Fun lighthearted comic. I get the feeling it wound up being a lot shorter than you originally intended, but you still got a nice clean and very importantly COMPLETE story in there. Points for doing cover art. You knocked that bit out of the park for sure!
Desdem: Fun expressions all over this, and I love how many panels you fit onto a page without making it seem crowded. Really helps fit more story in, and I feel that is important!
Bonus page was a treat
PHOSPHENE-
I loved Amelia from the get-go, been keeping my eye open for her round to drop and I wasn't disappointed! It was hilarious and they work so well together- liked the harsh contrast between the two character's color palettes!
DESDEMONICAL-
I LOVE black and white comics, it looks nice and neat! The interaction between the two characters is so natural and funny. Digged the dialogue a lot and the way they handled the fight was very clever. The last bonus page made me absolutely lose it
Welcome to Void!
PHOSPHENE: Good joke! Caught me off guard and made me chuckle :)
DESDEMONICAL: As a huge fan of the 9 panel format I was really into the start here and how it helped with the pacing of the strip.
Phosphene- HAHAHAH, I loved this. The staring contest was a good way of keeping this stuff brief. Also, I like the cover page :D
DesDemonical- I loved the paneling and the humor here! The first and second pages had me laughing. Great seeing more stuff from you :D
Phosphene- a staring contest between two bad bitches with hair over their eyes is the funniest thing I love this so much ahahahahah
Glad that both our comics focused on what's important-Ice Cream
These were both funny.
Phos you understand comedic timing pretty well and I appreciate that.
Des, I find it funny how throughout the more goofier pages Sorridega just ends up looking like Batter from OFF. Also the "I'm pretty fast" panel is my fav. Immaculate.
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