Hey Rtv! I hope you can handle 2 fights at once. Well then again your'e an old pro around here. Anyways I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with for this match...and i hope you like my rendition of Rtv!
Can't say it's the best thing i done, but it's better then defaulting.
Honestly i didn't really know i was in this challenge till there were a few days left. I thought i had to click twice to accept Gryphon's challenge, lol.
Aw well, it's always an honor to get challenged, good luck!!
HAWT DAMN... rtv.... dude.... wild... Yoshin, i was with you and rooting up till the last page... then panels became flat and 2D... and then... a shoryken >_<... you broke my heart yoshi... you broke my heart.... awesome beginning though
Hey man Nice work...although i thought that Unmei was to be expunged from the void universe...but I guess the old scapegoats are still the best...anyways yeah...sorry about the rushed quality but i thought i had alot less time then i atually did. But ah...the Chaos that is void...you gotta love it!
very good job guys. Yoshin's best fight yet in my opinion. Picked some very good angles. Though, even as much of a SF fan as I am, I'm not down with the dragon punch, but that's cool. You threw down well man. Rtv. Great stuff as usual. You pick some of the best angles on this site, and your coloring adds alot to your work. You consistently deliver some of the grittiest stuff on VOID. Peace.
RTV: the fight was a little hard to follow but ur colours made up for any incoherence i experienced. Nice bloody battle.
Yoshin: I like the style. It's clean and crisp. Maybe some more dynamic angles and more blood =P
Good luck both of u
That's his good side.
Yoshin, good job man! Well that last page kinda turned it down for i didn't know Yoshin also performs SF moves :/
I love how you took it, however (this is for everyone planning to fight me) Rtv!'s never uses personal verbs with a shortcut. (like: won't - will not, don't - do not)
Another thing i thought kicked ass is you let Rtv! use a Delaborate weapon from Su vs E. D'Muerte. You've improved and i dig the inking. You're line work needs more solitude, like here and there i spot a few wobbly lines.
My sstories always have a fukked up order...sorry about that. If you want a rematch, i'm up for it. This time i'll choose 'consciously' lol.
Fel, don't worry...the future looks better then the past, ask Cross.
Hey man thanks alot..yeah about those lines i think i'll pick up one of those french curves for that...I think you did an awesome job on yours too...although i wish i had time to color my pages that was the original plan but i just ran out of time...anyways my only gripe is with the fact that Your version of yoshin knows Kyosho! If you read my bio Yoshin has no memory of his past anymore so the tag tourney and all those other fights seemed like they never happened to him...regardless you did an awesome job very dramatic and stylized. Next time will be better I promise!
Whoa... pretty strange fights in this battle. Let's get started!
Yoshin: Great artwork I must say, I really couldn't find anything wrong with your style, except that maybe you could put in a background or two with some of those panels that had just white in them... but that's my opinion anyway, everything else was just as good, can't complain much.
Rtv!: Well... this is quite the strange fight if you know what I mean... I liked the art in this comic alot better than the other match, though alot of the wording was very hard to read (the red letters were slightly blurred and hard to make out), and the story was just as confusing as your last one (I probably need to go through your past battles to make up for that) But anywho... I really enjoyed the quality of this comic man!
Tough choice for this one... uh... I think I'm going with Yoshin on this fight... though Rtv gets some good points from me as well ;) Keep it up or something?
Future battles are of more importance then the past ones.
I NEVER work linear. In my fight against Chrimnon shit ties up and makes sence more as will those after that...it's like one big story but in a fukked up order. Hehe.
Thanx for the comments, i look forward to another but this time i'll pay attention.
Cheers.
trippin layouts and styles to each of you. Yoshin, that inkin job, totally kickass yo. Your action doesn't seen to ...I dunno actiony? hehe. It just needs slightly more movement and reactions. Now RTv! whoo, coloring is mad! and you managed to get it all down with 3 pages! Most of your panels seem blurry but I spose thats just you. Great work guys!
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