Nothin - How do you make death so cute? T.T Really enjoyed this. Kudos for making all those interlinking speech bubbles on page 2 read clearly as well!
Mr Kent - Love this experimental look, it’s super interesting! I got confused at the end though, I wasn’t sure if it was a flashback to when Zunguri was first killed, or if Marion had killed him.
Lucky- I love the snakey, his angry yell transitioning to a loving bite into both of them and then looking so so proud on top of the heap. Very cute I want more!
Kent- I'm surprised you were able to make this so colorful with your found images style. I wish there had been a little of zanguri's message because the last page has so much less text than the others. It looks cool though and I like that you had to make a little snakey model
Lucky: Apparently, *that's* how you fight an unreleased TV show. Great dialogue. Loved everything about the second page.
Kent: Looking wild, really fun to see. End also confused me a bit.
Nothin: Solid character art, solid backgrounds, solid lettering, almost all solid! I actually think you shouldn't have gone with the texture outside the newspaper clipping, it distracts from your work
Mister Kent: I liked where this was going but it ends so abruptly, I guess you were out of time? Please experiment more with this style for future comics!
Good job everyone!
Lucky Nothin This is a great comic for such a short amount of time, it is really cute and I feel is a really good pace, though I miss your colors especially with such a wild character as this.
Mister Kenter, I liked the set up but the death really confused me, I know snake died but Im not sure how? I do like the colors on that first page!
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