I am so proud of both of you for completing this and it's such an honor to have been part of this seeing it to completion. Congratulations! And as far as I'm concerned, you both won!! :)
I'm honestly just glad to see you two in action, and I think it's great that you ended up collaborating with each other. There isn't a whole lot I can say since it's clear that the both of you had a blast flexing your own styles.
Brown, welcome to Void!
It’s finally here!! And a two-parter too, nice. First off, idk if you worked on this script together or both did the half for your comic, but it flowed very smoothly. It felt like the same story and the characters had the same vibes despite the difference in your styles, which was cool! Onto my individual crits :)
Alberto - Your grungy colours and spot blacks have such a nostalgic feel! Love the detail on Rebel Roach’s suit, and how absolutely gross and feral you made Annie May (hahhhhh) look when she transforms. The energy Rebel Roach has is also great and clearly shows he’s a teenager even before the whole hentai thing. Firing some bombs and freaking out when they seem to do more damage seems VERY much like something an inexperienced kid with too much power would do. Also “harsh, I’m a roach” got a chuckle out of me.
I’d love to see you play with contrast a bit more or maybe cut down some detail in shots that are further away, because sometimes everything blended together a bit. I get the feeling the values may be pretty close together? When I look at the third panel on page 8 it takes me a few seconds to process where Roach’s body ends and where his head is.
Super cool to see you back in action though! Also to continue this battle despite having Covid, extremely powerful.
Brownkidd - Love your vibrant colours and sharp lines!! You did a great job stylising Rebel Roach too; he clearly has enough of his original design to be recognisable, but also looks totally at home in your style. The ending was great too. Someone is really gonna find her and think she’s a corpse XD One gripe I had is that sometimes there was a lot of text close together, such as page 1 and the top of page 5, maybe breaking up the bubbles would have helped! All in all still a rad comic though :)
Oh, man! I almost wish you guys had just collab’d on one comic, because now I have to rate these against each other!? But I’m glad you chose violence, because that’s what I’m here for, babyyy!
These are both awesome. I need to let them sit for a minute before I score them.
WOOHOO IT'S FINALLY HERE!!
You both did an impressive job with this battle, the connection between the two sides was a nice surprise!
I'm glad that you both could finish the battle and had fun with it despite the hard times Alberto had with covid...
Again, i wish you a full recovery, Alberto! And i hope we get to read more comics from you two in the future!
Alberto311: Very impressive work!! The effort shows in this comic and you did a tremendous job. I liked the witty dialogue, and the story was easy to follow. Great job!
Brownkidd: Loved this comic! The last two jokes were awesome, I love how self-congratulatory Liam is. Very well drawn, and very impressive work.
I enjoyed the shit out of both of these, great job!
This is one interesting battle. the Quality and writing are there and these two characters are quite fun and explosive to say the least.
Great Job with these comics and hopefully we see more of these two characters in the near future!
brownkidd:
alberto311:
brownkidd:
Here we gooooooo!!!!! Good luck, unc!
Heck yeah, Nephew!!!!
This is going to be epic! Is this the first Uncle and Nephew battle on Entervoid?!!!!!!!
I wonder... Maybe they'll give us a plaque or something! 🏆✨
I hope it's pretty with sparkly things on it! 🤩
alberto311:
brownkidd:
Here we gooooooo!!!!! Good luck, unc!
Heck yeah, Nephew!!!!
This is going to be epic! Is this the first Uncle and Nephew battle on Entervoid?!!!!!!!
I wonder... Maybe they'll give us a plaque or something! 🏆✨
brownkidd:
Here we gooooooo!!!!! Good luck, unc!
Heck yeah, Nephew!!!!
This is going to be epic! Is this the first Uncle and Nephew battle on Entervoid?!!!!!!!
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