Diz - Sorry about the hurricane, hope you and your family are safe.
TRM - Your backgrounds jumped in quality here! I also like the story concept and the gag where Mustard is literally scared out of his pants. I can’t help but notice the large number of typos though, and the continued lack of speech bubbles. I’d suggest running your script by someone first.
TRM: I really appreciate this comic, can't wait to see what else you cook up. I would love to see how your comics look once you get a more solid grasp of the fundamentals down to exploit even in this kitsch look. Kitsch aside, I think you can stand to make the lettering more standard at times just to make it a little easier to read
Diz: I really liked the art direction went for, making lunchbox look like a cuphead character! kind of unnecessary to call them toons when they already look like cartoons. really was gearing up for a story when Amelia faced them. hope your life junk gets better soon. : <
trm: I kind of like the primitive art style. it's still a little hard on the eyes, but it reads and everything is uniform, so you could definitely run on it. maybe a little refining with color pallets and how large you upload the pages at. as for story, it was very cute and very ambitious. i like your portrayal of Amelia as a ditzy scamp. a nice foil to the mustach's old man vibe. im like. why do they keep SERVING HER LOL!? are google reviews really worth it? amazing.
Diz - I liked the cover of this, and what you had completed. Nice work!
TRM - This was a fun comic, nice job!! I would recommend working on perspective a bit more, but I'm glad that you're posting more comics!
Diz- Bummer you didnt get to refine it, and I feel there was more to the cat joke that didnt get put in. Still really loved the lines on that last page. they looked really good and gave me sort of cup head vibes. Hope you stay safe from the storm.
TRM- You got me good with that dance at the end! It's a damn good dance. I wasn't certain about your style at first but but this comic helped solidify it for me. Also going back through I started spotting all the little cameos you snuck it.
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