great to see you back both of you
spikes, great flashy colors as usual, very entertaining
jamie, great story, art is a little shakey here and there, but serious looking. awesome job both of you
though your dialogue needs to be refined a bit, sometimes youre just rephrasing the last line that was said. its not THAT big of a deal, but would help the flow of your comic
again good stuff
Haha, James is back in town, niceness. Was a bit uneventful spikes, but it served it's point well. Just nice to see your art again.
MOD: Probably your best fight yet man. The phrasing seems a bit clumsy towards the end, but you've got an interestign direction going with your story. I hope you've talked to caanan about it, haha.
james - flashy and to the point.... I still love the shot with the bottle sticking out of his head =P coloring was a nice new approach
mod - you have really got to look at getting some fonts from blambot... the text was killin me. Despite the text, you did a good job.. Take some time work on your perspective... a lot of the shots were fishy! good job though
spikes : Love the new coloring style. Somehow the fact that all the colors are completely blunt gives a different kind of flavor to your works. Nice stuff, can't wait for STORY MODE YEAAAAAA.
MoD : Excellent coloring and linework. For a minute while I was reading I saw the katanas and thought "......Kill Bill" lol. Anyhow, it's time to get NITPICKY. The composition on most frames doesn't really give much. I like the general idea you had as far as camera and character positioning goes, but the angles need a bit of a touch-up. I agree with Mar about the font; presentation is very important, and using a Blambot font makes you look professional ;). USELESS NOT-NEARLY-AS-IMPORTANT-STUFF : James's sheath on page 2 is too small. And LENS FLARES.
what the hell, lets make a band.
Spikes, i just love it, sexy one keep em coming.
Jamie....nice stuff, maybe more details in the background, where's vencil eh?
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