Fred: Great character development for 9 to 5. I love how you kept with the format of the 9 to 5 comics but added some more depth to them showing us a new side of 9 to 5.
Fluff: Fantastic expressions and great use of a monoscale color pattern.
so nice to see Celif setting and achieving realistic goals and finally getting ahead in the world! We're all so proud of him, seeing his progress. UuU A DOCTOR! We're all so proud!
Wow can these 2 be any different? But you both managed to make it work and turn it into a fun story!
Fred- I like this glimpse further into 9 to 5's priorities. You'd think he's just your run of the mill accountant but it turns out his morals are a bit twisted. Makes him fit right in Void City. I noticed some typos so maybe something that you'll need to watch out for next time. I quick once over before posting should do the trick!
Fluff- The idea of Dr Celif is terrifying but knowing Void City it would just go under the VCPD's noses. And do I spy a VCV Calendar back there? Is that Raven? XDD
Fred - Woah, I think this is the first time we’ve seen 9 to 5 get mad! I love how one-track minded he is where everything flies except going against protocol. There was an awful lot of typos in here though, including whole missing words that made me really confused. I still can’t figure out what was meant by “can’t you just it under”.
Fluff - CELIF NO >:( Anyway, love this gross texture you’ve added! It definitely gives the feel of the shady alley and then apartment Celif operates in. There’s also something really funny about white-out being illegal.
This is pretty funny and quite entertaining to read. I like the ideas and interaction in both comics. it is super hard to choose a winner for this one!
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