Energy: Just do anything, you gotta stop waiting and push through, the more you make the more you get and right now you're not doing nearly enough.
Cab: Shaw's pretty cool and i relaly like the punch he has on page 4, the whole action was nice and the layout of those panels was really cool.
Energy noooooo!
Cab: this was pretty fun! Good work! Shaw reminds me of the original Wolverine run, where he is "the best one he is at what he does, and what he does isn't very nice". Like a big grizzly dude with a golden heart buried underneath the trauma. Obviously, this is not Wolverine, but it's going for that thing and I think you're doing it well. I really like this almost protective paternal thing that Shaw has with Morgan. I'd say the bit that felt a little off for me is where she explains her water powers to him, its a little stiff and felt a bit out of place with otherwise pretty good characterisation. But yeah nice little comic you got there!
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