Yeah, I suppose so. I just looked at the required pages up here and freaked. 5...jeez, and I still gotta catch up on my fight against Dan and Dalarminus. O_O;;
Hmm...the way it seems, we might need to push this back another week. I'm currently trying to catch up to my other two fights, and the odds of my completion aren't looking too good. If I manage to catch up to this fight one week prior to the deadline, then I'll be fine, but otherwise, you think we can hold it off if I don't make it on time ?
Ohhhh crap, I didn't think it would turn out like this O_O;. This was supposed to take place directly after my fight w/ Dan...but where is that fight ??
man RTV, style is awesome even in pencil, though i felt u could have done better in some panels. still you style is great
and the pencils are so smooth
and the fight was quick and to the point
zato man, will get around to the see the dan fight cuz i couldnt make sense of the first few panels
so ill hold my votes for now
but again, good BGs and layout
I know what you mean..Normally it takes me years to do one panel.
Next time better.
I had only 11 hours left to do two pages, lmao.
*Zato, you made it too! Looks good. Layout is indeed well placed.
Don't worry, i won't complain about the baseball cap(i think you're the fourth) or the 5 fingers on Rtv's hands. lol
I had only 3 days to work on all three pages...so I'm also at the disadvantage of a rush job...O_O;; I was pumping out 1 page per day...and I had only a couple hours to work on page 2 since I slacked off the whole day and pulled an all-nighter. ^^;
me again. Rtv!, after your last battle with p2, I must say this one was a little dissapointing, but I also realize, as I have not produced ANYTHING in such a long time that entries of that quality take a lot of time, so its understandable. Vieden, good job too, I must say again. I have a few issues with some of your proportions and facial structures, but who am I to talk? Mine are for crap. I would be interested in seeing some colored entries from you? I think it could add a lot to the emotion and feeling behind Veiden and his past.
Glad you understand. There isn't a single progress in the story or development, this is why i see it as a quick spar rather then battle.
Like better post what you got then no entry at all i always think.
Rtv!: Awesome style, I love the exaggeration. Quality is great and all but your brightness and contrast could use some work. I dunno, it's not so cool to me when one character finishes off the other without breakin' a sweat, so in the end I don't know how badass he ends up.
Veiden: Interesting story. Nice style, but it seems inconsistent (faces change, looks shaky) work on line quality a bit. Kind of a wierd way to end it. Giant robotic beam firing arm eh? I'm starting to see what Dan was talking about in his Stick Comic about that kinda stuff. however, there's GOTTA be a way to do it right. I'm thinking it has something to do with impact, anticipation and emotion. I'll have to experiment with Axis a bit.
All in all, good fights.
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