Nah, Fearn didn't lay in, she gave a critique which is greatly appreciated. I'll take a critical eye vs. a vow of silence any day.
Thank you all very much, nice to know you guys enjoyed it (or at least cared enough to tell me it wasn't great) and I can at least say with total assurance the art was well received, which makes me glad I haven't lost my touch at all. It's hard to produce something goofy in 3 pages. They can't all be Sally comics. I was worried slumming it around in art dregs may have hurt me, but I at least feel confident that I can do better in the future.
Still, thanks for the comments and critiques everyone. It's nice to know that Void still does that.
damn, Fearn really laid in XD
FredCorn: i loved the colour choices but they were a bit sloppily laid in. It looks a bit rushed. i dont.... ENTIRELY get the story but i thought dr fabulous was funny anyhow. Excellently horrific monster!
Rofl: Liked these colours too, subtle in a vintage sort of way. You drew the characters hilariously ugly and I liked the expressions a lot but I agree with Fearn in that the jokes fell a bit flat on their own.
Fantstic job? really??? Noooo these were some average comics.
TW: actual critique below lololo
Fred-Corn: art was okay, and the little jokes with like, broccoli Monty on the last panel were quite funny. Overall this was a fairly flat comic but I like how dr Fab kinda wants to be in the pot. Rest of the plot is like I say a bit flat, although I guess playing to Buster's power or whatever - it is very one dimensional.
ROLF: Art is pretty good quality. The story is actually even more b o r i n g than FredCorns: this joke has been done so. many. times. Seriously, I KNOW you can do better than this! I did NOT laugh. At all. Although I appreciate the metafictional elements on p. 1. Also whilst I appreciate Bad Apple refs, it is kinda riffing off nostalgia which is my current pet hate in media.
I know it's not easy to make interesting 3 page comics, but guise, GUISE!!! You are what I would think of as best voiders (Rolf and Fred, tbh I don't think I read any Corn stuff) I EXPECT MORE!!!!
xoxo
Oh man. I loved the self awareness of that comic Rofl
And the sheer amount of not giving a shit from Dr in your comic Fred and Corn made the entire situation so hilariously inappropriate for the stakes at hand.
Fantastic job all three of you.
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