PIXELCHOP- While I'm ever a fan of the silent comic, I feel either more panels or some word bubbles would've explained some things. I know finding a reason for these encounters between fighters to fight can be tough, but I'd hoped to see something beyond (at least to me) the puzzling first half. Still, beyond that, your comic was a joy. The action, the expressions- even the way eating those hookers kind of influenced Pud's outfit were really clever choices.
KARMACHARMA- Nice full color comic in three days? impressivo! I'm so used to your chubby cheeked squeaky clean comic hijinks, it was a little surprising to see you take on the visceral gore you smacked us in the face with here. Pud comes off as this nondescript, adorable little imp, that you really on't expect him to eat your face- much less your whole head. That inside out action before he chomps down was wicked
Very nice work Karma. It was a fun short read. I don't think I really did your character justice cuteness wise tho. I wasn't sure how his transformation worked, so I just had him kill a few people off screen to explain the transition. Thanks for the battle. It was nice to see your interpretation of my character.
Pixel, your work really has improved compared to the the previous comics I've seen on the site. Strong, bold and full of life it comes off as an energetic approach and I would like to see more of this. To tell a story without dialogue and still manage to pull off a complete story is commendable indeed. Now I want to fight you even more. Jolly good work.
Karma, Clean and precise. A solid work all around. I would have preferred more backgrounds on your work as it feels rather short on the side. Don't let that fool you though as I adore your work, but there is always room for improvement n'est pas?
Solid round from both of you lovely people.
PIXEL: The art is super nice and I love the expressions. Without any text and with closer panels it was a little hard for me to follow at times (could be that I'm trying to do work at the same time but EH) - I think my biggest issue here was where it was a bit of a disconnect with Lily patting Pud to him biting her. I think zooming out or having a sound effect or something would have helped there. Likewise with Pud flying through the air into the bin, I think the close up made things slightly unclear. Love the sequencing and everything else besides.
KARMA: Suuuuch a niggly thing but having a black tail on your speech bubbles means that the directioning of your bubbles gets lost a bit - not a huge deal in a comic like this where only one person is speaking in each panel, but something to keep in mind. Love the effort that's gone into backgrounds etc but yeah as has been mentioned - perspective & relationships etc need some work. Colours in this are great and it's a nice neat story :)
Light Speed Critique: Pixelchop, Panels, just a little extra love in lining them up exactly and keeping it consistent. Being way wild with them looks intentional, but being slightly off looks like an accident. Love the feeling of action though. Karma, little bit more perspective work on the backgrounds (and her feet on the floor) doesn't need to be super accurate, but seems inconsistent within itself.
Ahh I really love the way you portrayed Pud! Such a little monster, and you even used his powers hehehe. It's funny that both of us used Lilly getting attacked by him unprovoked. Just let the woman and her cactus live their life.
Pixelchop - You got some rather nice art here. It took me a bit to get what was going on in the last page, especially with lilly's hair colour being different in that one panel, that's just confusing.
KarmaCharma - Be careful about the relationship of things in your drawings. That desk was not only weirdly sized, but also seemed wavering in it's exact proportions. Perspective too, you can find a thousand tutorials on that. Otherwise, it's got a nice quality and all, it's not bad yo.
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