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King of VOID 2015: Round 1

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King of VOID 2015: Round 1
By Evi
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Capslock & Shift
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Final Score: 7.23
King of VOID 2015: Round 1
By Ten Dead Kings
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Kars
Final Score: 4.24

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Kozispoon
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9 years ago
TDK- Haha, when you can't beat 'em, LOAF. Sorry to see this didn't go the way you intended, but what you did have done seemed to have promise! I really loved your epic posing of Xia as she announced the tournament. Seeing her just whip up the crowd even got me going! Also is that a Doctor Fabulous AND Shrek I spy in the audience? XD I'm bummed there's no dialogue as I feel (after only recently being introduced to your comics) that your humor is a real strong suit for you. Here's hoping despite the misstep here that you keep on making us laugh with your future sequential endeavors :) EVI- WHATTA DEBUT! So glad you seemed to have started not only a first round for the king of void, but also sort of a secondary intro comic! Its been so long since anyone's seen these folks, its rad to see a bit of a refresher for the reader and any new folks just tuning in. Really really love yourp aneling and inks. Its thiick and chunky with just the right amount of toon feel. The paneling on page two is especially great. Way to intermingle two panels with the toss of that grenade. Really creative! Everything, fro mthe inks, the colors, the groovy post magic/explosion effects from page to page. Seriously, nice work.

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Evi
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9 years ago
aw TDK it's a shame you couldn't finish but I still enjoyed what you had set up. I was maybe too amused by that page 2 crowd panel's beer hat :D and I thought you did a great job of portraying Cap's and shift's fighting styles! That dramatic catloaf at the end was awesome ahaha. Shen: :D aaaa I'm happy it makes you happy because I'm so happy they are finally in a comic too ahaha! Two years of never using them is a long time so I wrote this sorta like a "re-introduction". Pocketmouse: Thank you! This is actually my first void comic with traditional ink. I used a small brush pen for general areas and then a fineliner for the smaller details... I think I know which areas you're talking about and it's probably where I went too much with the brush pen D: need to practice!!

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Animeshen
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9 years ago
lol TDK is that REALLY the only important dialogue we're missing? thats kind of hilarious XD you're right though I actually follow it okay, Im just sad its so messy and unfinished because it looks like it could have been so awesome! lol but what i can make out looks cool and the "tab wins because cat" is hilarious XD evi, lol holy crap your thumbs XD IM SO HAPPY we finally get to see them battle and they are everything I hoped they would be!! oh my god your expressions and dialogue here are phenomenal! I dont know how to critique it, this comic is a delight and it makes me happy!

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Ten Dead Kings
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9 years ago
Again, apologies to Evi and Everyone for not stepping up this time, I severely overestimated the amount of work I can do when there's no air-conditioning. The only really important bit of dialogue is this: Page 3, Panel 3: CAPSLOCK: How can you see without eyeballs? Panel 4: Kars: How can you walk around without a brain? Panel 5: CAPSLOCK: (angry robot noises)

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Pocketmouse
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9 years ago
Ahah TDK Yours looks like it would have been a riot. I really love how you handled Xias yelling expressions! Maybe next time, eh? ;) Evi I love your colouring. (Can I keep Shift? Cute Roboy getting excited about explosives? Yes please.) On the other side of the coin I'd say your linework can get a bit clunky in places, so it might be worth investing some time into trying some different techniques/mediums. I'd be interested to know if you ink traditionally or digitally? Anyway, this is a solid comic involving some fantastic characters! So great stuff! : D

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Chimaeric
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9 years ago
@evi: im jelly of the easy readibility of your comic... so jelly. @tdk: ;.; still enjoyed your comic

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Julz
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9 years ago
I kinda just wanna make up my own dialogue for TDK's.

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Ten Dead Kings
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9 years ago
Uploaded. It's terrible, don't look.

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Evi
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9 years ago
Uploaded and sent my custom thumbnails to the new staff email. Phew I'm so happy it's all done!!! (Also not sure if I messed up the tags, I can't seem to see them??) I can't wait to see your side of the battle TDK!

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Evi
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9 years ago
yOOOOOO LET'S GO TEE DEE KAAAY

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Shojin
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9 years ago
Good luck to the both of you! :D

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Animeshen
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9 years ago
I'm so excited for this fight!