I voted, but forgot to comment- 10 points from Hufflepuff! >=[
HOBBIT- So bright, so colorful. Your comic was the stuff videogames are made of. I half expected the question blocks from super mario to show up in the background. This was another short and sweet tale much like your opponentns. I especially dug your beauty panels showcasing Clown Princesses radiance. Also, did I spy some pixel princess blushing? So I detect some mad crushing??
ATOMICFISH- It seems every mash up of CP with any other fighter is just too cute. Clown Princessi s the bees knees, the cats pajamas, and I love that you're making it something of a tradition to bring her out every October. I dunno if you've gotten flack for your destaurated color palate, but I rather like it! It really showcases pixel princesses neon repertoire of digital magickery. As for the lack of dialogue, I am ever a fan of the silent comic, but I wish you'd pushed this little tale further. It's got a hold of my heart strings, but it didn't quite get a good enough grip to tug at them.
Hobbit -
You're just kinda dropping colours down and not really paying attention to how they interact with eachother. Before you start colouring, try creating a colour story that has a mood or a feeling, then try as hard as you can not to use any colour outside of that color story. Colour can do so much more than just make art seem more polished, it's like emotion magic! Look at Atomic's comic! She's forced to use all the same colours as you, but tried really hard to contain them and create a mood.
It's super impressive you did two comics dude, I didn't even realize until I saw peeps mentioning it! I'd never be brave enough to try, it sounds waaaayy too hard.
Atomic -
Of course Blob Princess and Onion Princess would be on the cover of Sassy Princess magazine. Who else is sassier?
A little more detail in your backgrounds would be nice. I know that you're doing these really cartoony, but I still think there are important, fun details that you're leaving out of your store fronts and city streets. Just check out some photo's and try to build a little internal library of interesting details and structures, you won't be able to make up stuff from nowhere. Just sketch some stuff down to help you remember it when you need it. You could've especially used a more interesting background in the highwire panel, because without a background there really is no sense of dread and the joke gets weakened alot.
As I said before, I think you did a really good job with your colour pallete. I love the late day feel to whole thing. It's just a great little detail that makes the setting feel just that much more unique. And LIKE YOU ALWAYS DO SO YOU SHOULDN'T BE DOWN ON YOURSELF JEEZ, your story is short and sweet, and your characters are so charming. I love how this is the second comic I've read in an hour on void that has a "DAT ASS" face. We're a incredible people.
these are both cute, y'all should be proud. Hobbit youre really improving, keep up whatever it is that's doing that!
Atomicfish I like the color palette, though I'm curious if pix-princess was right behind her why she didn't just call out to her?
It's cute that they both end with elephants
Atomicfish:
Lurker Sean:
PRINCESS HYPE!
Don't get too hype. For Hobbs maybe, but mine is a mess.
HUSH YOU BEAUTIFUL BUTTERFLY, your comic was adorable! a short n' sweet little thing about friendship through mutual love of elephants, haha! i especially liked the last page with the strong lighting, and how you drew Pixel's power on page 3. it took me a second read through to see that Clown had dropped elephant treats on the first page, that maybe could have been a bit clearer, I wasnt sure why Pixel was following her at first. The following page also had a lot of great antics, fun circus gags, I bet you could have fit a couple more in there even and made it a more perilous journey! I love that at the end of all her comics Clown Princess makes friends with everyone, shes just so cute and lovable, who wouldnt want to follow her around, hah! Great job, Fish!
HOBBIT your colouring style works well with characters like these since its so bright and saturated. I love how you draw Clown Princess- except that hyper-realistic face on a cartoon body on page 4, that was a little freaky! I liked her better on page 3, haha! actually though my favorite page is the doodle on the last one, I wish i could have read more about Pixel being taught how to perform circus tricks!
Its so good to see these girls again, I'm glad you battled them! I hope I get to see them again next year!
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