Psycho Sean -
Aww that sucks dude, but yeah, taking photo's of pages really sucks.
Mista Mista Kent Baby -
It feels like you had to take alot of time saving shortcuts in this fight, you don't have alot of backgrounds, and they're pretty simple/rough when they are there. Gargonne and AEGIS is a great character, but I think you emote with their faces a little bit more. I know when I design a new character, I sometimes find an animated character with similar features to see how another artist solved those problems of expression. You could always go study Ursula or something, she's p cool. :)
I like that the curves and roundness of Gargonne makes you push the dynamism and flow of your forms. And I thought it was hilarious he has his whole melodramatic "These are the beginning of my dastardly self-portraits" but if you go back, they're drawings of stuff like kitties and pine trees. Priceless.
also, page 4 is my favorite! Dan's talk all tough, dynamic close up, then i scroll down and...
..."your a creep". I fell laughing sooooo hard on the ground
Man a great first comic for gargonne Kent, the dialogue felt natural and was very amusing. You nailed my character spot on and I can't wait to see what other shenanigans Gargonne gets into
As for me I'm sorry but after what the pages for mrnoitaull' battle looked liked, i chose not to post my pages until i can scan them and not do a shitty photo. I do have some pages done and i'll finish the rest of the comic so i can post them as a BB just like the OS-1 battle.
I feel really shitty, but i wont mope ill just finish them and post as soon as i can. Again thanks for accepting my challege kent, you really do a great job every time you post!!!
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