TDK, that is a brilliant plot device. You could build a whole story just off this one comic.
Mouse: I do hope you continue with this trend of revealing odd mashed up bits of Merrik's past.
Yayyy, it's up!
TDK: Nice to see a shorter, complete story from your end. Some of the backgrounds and details are a little lacking, but it's clear what story you're trying to tell.
Mouse: Love those colored pages. The opening page where young Merrick's jetboarding around is a great standout, especially. One small nitpick is to maybe watch the perspective on where people are placed in the panel, as some look a little closer or farther away than they should be. Other than that, it's really neat to see Merrick IN THE FUTURE and what Neo Void City looks like! (also I SEE AN OSSAN )
Pocketmouse, I will need you to reupload your pages, they don't work! I saw you're going out of town so just get them in when you can and let me know when you get them uploaded. TDK you are free to work on your comic more to be fair. Just let me know.
Hey guys,
I've just got news; my bf is taking me away somewhere for a few days as a surprise, but this means I'll have a couple of days less than expected to work on this battle. I'll be uploading what I have before I leave so I am sorry if a couple of pages aren't quite done to the same standard as the rest.
Hopefully you shall find it still readable!
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