TOFUBEAST- For only two pages, I found myself really liking it! Straight and to the point in a 'shocking twist' sort of way. Way to ramp up tension and come out the other side with a laugh. :)
ROFLQU- I Loved the set up, the tension and the story, but I felt it brickwalled by the end. Like there should be more. What happened? Did Mystery meat turn into the terminator? Is it looking for Sarah Connor?
Well, I'll comment if no one else does!
As rough as the job may have been, I'm actually really happy you're improving your inkwork. I think it's really solid and your attention to the line width is a really important step for you. You need to work on your hands, even if you did that in a few minutes, there's no reason why you can't learn to work a more realistic hand shape, so you should practice it out instead of making them squares.
Hopefully next time you'll be able to pull your out, just don't accept challenges just because (that'll get you into trouble, as I know from experience)! All in all, it's good that I can see improvement in what you're doing.
Kozispoon:
Tofubeast:
I LIED I FINISHED EARLY AND GOT THREE HOURS TO SPARE.
GONNA TURN IN SOMETHING ANYWAY.
What a dirty trick Tofu, da fuq XDDD'
I'M SORRY I need to learn to not take comic battles when I'm working all day erryday
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