NothingGoingOn: That was good! Really charming set up that I thought it was appropriate considering the simplistic nature of your opponents character. Of course it was good to see Roy and Mammon in there too. I think all the character interactions going on in Void at the moment are really great. I can only reiterate what other people have said though. I felt a little more love could have gone into the backgrounds. It was all a bit grey and though it did focus my attention on the characters it did lack a certain sense of place. Also some background characters were solid, and some were very apparition like. Just a bit of confidence there will help you out a lot.
Qyzex: Slime's comics are adorable. I realise you didn't get to show us what you would of liked which is what i'll attribute the abruptness of the comic to. But that's cool. You've got some really lovely stuff going on here. And I agree with Fed, some contrast in the colours would be really interesting to see as you go.
Nothing: Pretty good, I like your coloring and general style - wish you'd spent a bit more time on the backgrounds though, they look a bit empty to me - and where are the feet, man? They keep getting cut off all the time. Still a solid effort, you obviously know how to draw well, now just work on leveling up!
Qysex: Cute little animation - your cardboard style is immensly charming and the colors work great (though maybe a bit more contrast between foreground and background will help in my opinion). As bl00 said the ending is a bit abrupt but in a 1 weeks time this is still a solid effort.
Good work on both parts - glad to see Beo is fighting still!
OMG Kichi, I love how you kept the whole threesome thing, and you even got the height right, cause Roy's kind of a shorty compared to Mammon and Beo ;D And eventhough you didn't color the backgrounds, I think it's kind of a plus that you kept it grey so that we could easily see the characters and what we are suppose to be focused on.
Qyzex, I love that construction paper style guys srsly! The color scheme is really nice too. And the animation, I thought was a nice use of resources, considering these ARE webcomics, and if you can, why not right?
The only real complaint I have for both of these is that the endings seem a bit abrupt, like we're only seeing a peice of a story and not the whole thing.
Kichi, your ending was like a cut-to ending where we missed all the good stuff that happened before-hand.
Qyz, I feel like it was over before we got to see anything really happen, like it's just unfinished story-wise.
Also, I just have to say that in both of these slime is just too Friggin cute!
Anyway good efforts on both your parts!
errr, hmmm. That is not what Page 3 is supposed to be.
http://i.imgur.com/L94Xb.jpg
that is page 3.
I dunno if I uploaded the same one twice, or if it just error'd, but is there a way to fix this?
I'm behind. I had major tooth pains that put me out of action, and then I had the tooth removed. So I've been more or less just trying to relax and not explode.
So, I will try to pick it up and get this done. Hopefully
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